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Orion's Frown by Jerry Bolton Sunday, August 12, 2012 Rated "G" by the Author. Share Print Save Become a Fan

a zephyr moves the night giving the trees their soft sway rustling leaves 'neath the moon's glow bright tonight like a highlight from heavens' portal causing the dark to recede spotlighting the grass bending in cadence with the leaves as they quiver from the gentle wind serene is the night then . . . harsh light streams through an opened window naked is the beam it projects fat, harsh are the colors as it stabs the night noise from inside the opened window strident laughing disrupting the peace and quiet of before as though by rote the leaves began their dance as if trying to come to terms with the harshness of the window's bright and now the constellation Orion, the Hunter watches with frowning intensity ©August 1, 2012 / Jerry Pat Bolton
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Reviewed by Vivian Dawson	8/15/2012

Loved the adventure Jerry coming from such splendid night vision Lady Vivian




Reviewed by Morgan Merriweather	8/12/2012

This is neat imagery! random thought I am irritated with the whole mercury light bulb thing,stupid. Harsh light indeed. That thought aside, liked this Jerry.




Reviewed by Jane Noponen Perinacci	8/12/2012

I can actually see what's going on and hear the sounds! Fantastic! Love ya! Jane




Reviewed by Odin Roark	8/12/2012

Graphic wordsmithing of what could be argued is fear vs enlightenment. Enjoyed the delicate layering as the intensity rose.




Reviewed by Lily of Lough Neagh C. Dennis-Woosley	8/12/2012

Nice... a science fiction affect! I can see this zephyr's westerly wind in the darkness of night moving everything ominously as all sleep! I can hear the deep bellow of the laugh! Orion will have to watch warily of what comes his direction! :) Great Jerry :) Love and Light Lily




Reviewed by Budd Nelson	8/12/2012

an intense dark time vision my friend watching as Orion looks on budd