|Reviewed by Morgan Merriweather
|your stuff has been very awesome lately and cool....ther is this painting i know similiar to this .....have to send it to you.....enjoy i'll take it down in a few.....
|Reviewed by Jane Noponen Perinacci
|Oh, do come into my underground where I can ripen your soul!
|Reviewed by Vivian Dawson
|What a daring piece *Jerry*
filled with scary...but, of
course..skills of a master poet
|Reviewed by Adriaen Valerius (Reader)
|Fantastic Jerry, with every sentence you tickle the imagination.
What a woman she must have been as even YOU succumbed and are lost forever.
|Reviewed by Laura Fall
|Absolutely outstanding writing Jerry as I agree with the other reviews Bravo!!! Laura
|Reviewed by Odin Roark
|It's never easy to pen the underpinnings of sadness. Well done.|
|Reviewed by D. Vaineo
|Jerry, Your poetry is exceptional and gets better with
each poem you write!!
|Reviewed by Vesper Darby
|an amazing gift to the world of poetry. i can hear this dark beautiful piece as one of enrico caruso's closing offerings....bravo bravooo jerry|
|Reviewed by Darrell and Kathy Adams
|This was, for me, a dark dive into a realm of intelligent, procellous (looked it up) scary and attractive realm. I am left with questions and wanting more. Absolutely well done. Be well, Kathy|
|Reviewed by Budd Nelson
|you reasert yourself here my friend with this feast for the reader to enjoy and wonder at the imagination that could carry us on such an intense journey, bravo
|Reviewed by Diana Legun
|Jerry, this one knocks me off my chair. And it is a really sturdy chair. I so wonder where your composing self was to write this so fresh off the press. You have created a pomegranate of a poem, filled with juicy beads of vivacity. You have given me two vocabulary words to look up: 'bivouac' and 'procellous'. You presented a tactile sensation of ripping sleep from a soul, a concept that leaves my skin smarting. "stapled by your written words" . . . what literary perforation, and more 'cutfull' lacerating in "the shards of your yesterday's dawn." "...cleaving questions" more slice'n dice, and I find this entire work of poetry mesmerizingly acute. These line breaks are great, especially the short line all to itself: "and oh, my". I feel the whole composition as though it was the final movement in a powerful opera. ~~ Diana|
|Reviewed by Lily of Lough Neagh C. Dennis-Woosley
|WOW, she sounds like a demon!
"I sharpened my teeth
against the whetstone that was you
you; showed me the strength of words
in your soliloquy of past demons
and magnificent mystification
you co-opted destruction
out of tranquility"
She must be one "helluva" temptress that's for sure darlin'!
very good strong poem Jerry!
Visually I see it all!
WOW and that's a powerful WOW
Love and Light