|Reviewed by Jane Noponen Perinacci
|You capture a moment and make it yours! Fantastic work!
|Reviewed by T Jett (Reader)
|You've captured the moment so wonderfully, Jerry! Great poem!|
|Reviewed by Amber Moonstone
|Like two ships passing in the night, a glimpse of beauty is something to behold.
Another great visual poem, Jerry!
Peace, love and light,
|Reviewed by Budd Nelson
|What an enticing vision you were able to portray here my friend
|Reviewed by Ronald Hull
|So sensual it seems to be a memory spawned from an old photograph.
|Reviewed by Adriaen Valerius (Reader)
|This are the little pearls Jerry.
The smiles we get when we pass by but also the smiles we give.
A great vivid description
|Reviewed by Odin Roark
|A glance can often be the total experience, or should I say, should be the total experience. Your phrasing suggests the latter.|
|Reviewed by Laura Fall
|This is an alluring write written so fantastic as always Laura
|Reviewed by D. Vaineo
|" Ah those eyes," women's eyes are incredible. Some
sparkle,many are intense for the eyes never lie and
they are a woman's greatest asset!
|Reviewed by Annabel Sheila
|Nothing wrong with a flirty little encounter with a stranger....as a mature woman I still appreciate the subtle looks I get from time to time....nicely done, Jerry.
|Reviewed by Lily of Lough Neagh C. Dennis-Woosley
|You have really captured her
whole essence and how it caught your eye.
Including her gratitude for noticing her
with a silent smiling thank you :)
What a little flirt she is lol
Great as always with your visuals Jerry
Love and Light