|Reviewed by Jane Noponen Perinacci
|So true! What we know will never go away! I must find that lagoon!
|Reviewed by Diana Legun
|These two lines shout out from the rest, for me: "that we just might know a lot more than/they give us credit for" -- This is an introspective postulation that feels very solid and true. "after one more day on earth" REALLY gets attention! Your poem vibrates with an edgyness with which we can directly identify (from likely every living room in the nation). ~~ Diana|
|Reviewed by Joy Hale
|Finally, someone steps up to the bat to tell it just like it is! Bravo, Jerry. A well done, well laid out poem for the future of the United States of America. I hope many will read your poem and take in the severity of our country's demise AND make plans for their future survival. No, it won't go away but we can be prepared!
Joy L. Hale
|Reviewed by T Jett (Reader)
|I'll take stock in your poetry, Jerry!!|
|Reviewed by Odin Roark
|Now, this be what I'm talkin' 'bout. Love those in-between-the-lines touches of wisdom, rattling the chains to break out. Keeping us on the edge of discovery throughout, marks this as one of your best, for this reader. Your closing stanza throws the mirror squarely before our eyes and thrusts us out of our comfort zone, making us aware: we all have to take stock... honestly. Really, honestly. Enjoyed this immensely.|
|Reviewed by D. Vaineo
|Jerry, Your poetry has soared to new heights...
|Reviewed by Lily of Lough Neagh C. Dennis-Woosley
|Time something we all pay attention to
it forever marches on and during that
time (for us old ones) we do take stock
we look at it much closer and reflect on
ourselves and look ahead to see what
awaits with impatient wondering.
Excellent Jerry, one that must be read
a few times
Love and Light
|Reviewed by Budd Nelson
|this one causes deep concentration my friend, very well written with conviction.