|Reviewed by Diana Legun
|I see this as a daisy of a poem. There is lightness and play in the tone and voice. I enjoy the little expression, "eh..." because in two letters it holds such personality, and 'oomph', what a lollipop of a word! I like how you treat the whole poem as though you are rolling a taste around, trying to decide about it, then punctuate the piece with three words about the four-letter word and place them in italics, and by doing so made the daisy become a rose. Nice one! ~~ Diana|
|Reviewed by Jane Noponen Perinacci
|What a lucky lady to have a man like you! What happened here? Did she leave you or did you dump her? People like me need to know.
|Reviewed by Ronald Hull
|Reviewed by Morgan Merriweather
|Good Morning Jerry!, Love is indeed complicated, there are many variations. Between a man and a women it could be a very beautiful thing. But, to care for someone for even a moment is a spectacular form of love too! All the best Jerry, Morgan|
|Reviewed by Odin Roark
|Yeah, know what you mean. Me and mine use another word altogether, even though we occasionally slip and use love... guess we're hard wired.|
|Reviewed by Christine Tsen
|I like the way you use cadences of speech in this charming sweet poem!|
|Reviewed by Janna Hill
|You have dissected a feathery word and resurrected it with the weight of a stone.
|Reviewed by Laura Fall
|Aw how sweet this is what an excellent write Laura|
|Reviewed by Connie Faust
|Glad you said it, Jerry...it's also the most needed and most welcomed word in the world.
When I think of how many times God uses it about us, I am floored!
|Reviewed by Lily of Lough Neagh C. Dennis-Woosley
|It is a word not to be used loosely unless meant
from the heart. Too many people use it as an
add at the end of a sentence to finish it off.
Or as said, used too many times it loses the meaning.
It is a difficult word to profess a deep feeling
sometimes it alone does not adequately express
itself. So as poets we try many different ways
to elaborate on the feeling. "Love" is very
difficult to express deeply.
Very good Jerry as always :)
Love and Light
|Reviewed by Budd Nelson
|as incomplete as the three words seem at times, they are the ones we have to use, keep it up my friend..keep syaing them
|Reviewed by Adriaen Valerius (Reader)
|You're right, probably the most used word all over the world
As long as we do not say it out of habit and without thinking,
It will never lose its meaning and never become boring.
Keep saying it Jerry, to everyone you care about