|Reviewed by Keith Rowley
|I like this piece - it makes a strong impression comprised of empty hallways and timeless, resonant contemplation briefly illuminated by beams of focused, conscious thought - a bit like the conscious mind examining the unconscious psyche from which all derives. . My own intuition is that the dark is eternal invincible and that light is fleeting and deceitful. But there - horses for courses as we say. Good work - I always appreciate those things that make me think or just contemplate thoughtlessly.|
|Reviewed by Diana Legun
|"lo, these many years" -- this carries heaviness which the lines of this poem lift greatly up. Painting a good frame of ascent with the italics. ~~ DIana|
|Reviewed by Vesper Darby
|jerry this is a uniquely written piece of advice for so many that struggle with demons of darkness from the past...we are many|
|Reviewed by Vivian Dawson
|Darkness is a lonely place
with the light comes an
awakening for happiness
*Jerry* be anew as written
|Reviewed by Jane Noponen Perinacci
|This poem made me feel O.K.. I can do this! Thank you!!
|Reviewed by Janna Hill
|Cheers. May we all conquer our darkness.
|Reviewed by Ronald Hull
|So will the light company, when they get Louisiana's power back on.
|Reviewed by Budd Nelson
|one of your very best insightful write my friend
|Reviewed by T Jett (Reader)
|I can truly relate and its liberating! You're so awesome, Jerry!|
|Reviewed by Laura Fall
|A fascinating write my friend Laura
|Reviewed by Kate Clifford
|A great truth is within this write.|
|Reviewed by Odin Roark
|Those of us who have been down this road know that sometimes the renewed light can be overwhelming.|
|Reviewed by Lily of Lough Neagh C. Dennis-Woosley
|What a wonderful way to face the demons
Look them square in the face for what
they were and state how you feel!
In other words, be off with ya now for
I am one with the light and you can
creep off into the shadows and wither away.
Love and Light
|Reviewed by Adriaen Valerius (Reader)
|This is really fantastic Jerry, if you are able to look back this way on your life.
I am no longer afraid of you
what is done is done
I am a better person now
I'm very very impressed