|Reviewed by Vivian Dawson
|"Fall(ing) into Winter"
*Jerry* for me
is like falling off a
horse and getting right
|Reviewed by Annabel Sheila
|Love the title....I love Fall..but when winter comes around I know I'm gonna "fall" into it and land flat on my face...ugh! Lovely, lively lilt to this one, my friend! Enjoyed....
|Reviewed by Mary Ann Biddinger
Beautiful colours the Fall..Winter's blanket too!
Hot buttery rum looks inviting.
Wonderful poem to welcome the seasons !
Lady Mary Ann
|Reviewed by Connie Faust
|I like the way you address the leaves themselves in the first verse--and promise them a song. No melancholy in your outlook on winter's approach. You almost make me catch the mood and welcome it all!
(But not quite) Great, unique writing!
|Reviewed by John Flanagan
this is a beautifully written poem
|Reviewed by Laura Fall
|A delightful write indeed Laura|
|Reviewed by Ronald Hull
|Looking forward to the best part of winter. It's the nasty backside that I don't like. Got to get some of that Louisiana color myself a bit later.
|Reviewed by Lily of Lough Neagh C. Dennis-Woosley
|What a beautiful scene Jerry
today it is only a high of 57 here
it looks like Autumn is on its way.
Door County Autumn is beautiful
just like your poem so wonderfully
describes. "Bright reds, vibrant blues,
what a scene." But here they drink
Gluhwein which is delicious Mmmmm
Wonderful poem Jerry you have me
very ready for the transition.
Love and Light
|Reviewed by Jane Noponen Perinacci
|Raise that hot buttered rum, hon! I'll make a toast with ya!
|Reviewed by Christine Alwin
|Cheers Jerry..this is cozy and most beautiful~|
|Reviewed by Budd Nelson
|wonderful visions of the changes in seasons and now a toast to you my friend
|Reviewed by RWEHAVING FUN
|a triumphant trio of verses, Jerry!|
|Reviewed by Adriaen Valerius (Reader)
|A nice transition trough the fall of the leaves from autumn into winter.
But eh................ where are you, because we want to join you with the Hot Buttered Rum of course.
|Reviewed by Felix Perry
|Captive images in each line, nicely done old friend.