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| Reviewed by Vivian Dawson |
9/15/2012 |
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"Fall(ing) into Winter"
*Jerry* for me
is like falling off a
horse and getting right
back on
Lady Vivian |
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| Reviewed by Annabel Sheila |
9/14/2012 |
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Love the title....I love Fall..but when winter comes around I know I'm gonna "fall" into it and land flat on my face...ugh! Lovely, lively lilt to this one, my friend! Enjoyed....
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| Reviewed by Mary Ann Biddinger |
9/13/2012 |
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Jerry ~
Beautiful colours the Fall..Winter's blanket too!
Hot buttery rum looks inviting.
Wonderful poem to welcome the seasons !
Lady Mary Ann |
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| Reviewed by Connie Faust |
9/13/2012 |
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I like the way you address the leaves themselves in the first verse--and promise them a song. No melancholy in your outlook on winter's approach. You almost make me catch the mood and welcome it all!
(But not quite) Great, unique writing!
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| Reviewed by John Flanagan |
9/13/2012 |
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Jerry,
this is a beautifully written poem
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| Reviewed by Laura Fall |
9/13/2012 |
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| A delightful write indeed Laura |
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| Reviewed by Ronald Hull |
9/13/2012 |
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Looking forward to the best part of winter. It's the nasty backside that I don't like. Got to get some of that Louisiana color myself a bit later.
Ron |
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| Reviewed by Lily of Lough Neagh C. Dennis-Woosley |
9/13/2012 |
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What a beautiful scene Jerry
today it is only a high of 57 here
it looks like Autumn is on its way.
Door County Autumn is beautiful
just like your poem so wonderfully
describes. "Bright reds, vibrant blues,
what a scene." But here they drink
Gluhwein which is delicious Mmmmm
Wonderful poem Jerry you have me
very ready for the transition.
Love and Light
Lily |
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| Reviewed by Jane Noponen Perinacci |
9/13/2012 |
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Raise that hot buttered rum, hon! I'll make a toast with ya!
Love ya!
Jane |
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| Reviewed by Christine Alwin |
9/13/2012 |
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| Cheers Jerry..this is cozy and most beautiful~ |
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| Reviewed by Budd Nelson |
9/13/2012 |
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wonderful visions of the changes in seasons and now a toast to you my friend
budd |
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| Reviewed by Roger Wayne Eberle |
9/13/2012 |
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| a triumphant trio of verses, Jerry! |
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| Reviewed by Adriaen Valerius (Reader) |
9/13/2012 |
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A nice transition trough the fall of the leaves from autumn into winter.
But eh................ where are you, because we want to join you with the Hot Buttered Rum of course.
Cheers Jerry. |
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| Reviewed by Felix Perry |
9/13/2012 |
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Captive images in each line, nicely done old friend.
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