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| Reviewed by Diana Legun |
10/1/2012 |
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| This poem has literally got wings and flies (as in soars, not buzzy insects). I like "...sends me to a special place," so transformative. ~~ DIana |
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| Reviewed by Vivian Dawson |
9/25/2012 |
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Such a softness to your declaration
*Jerry* of love as true should be
Lady Vivian
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| Reviewed by Annabel Sheila |
9/24/2012 |
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Uplifting declaration of love, Jerry!!! Makes one want to kick up their heels!!! Love it!
Anna |
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| Reviewed by Jane Noponen Perinacci |
9/22/2012 |
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The wonderfulness of feeling like this is the feeling that being truly in love can only bring! I love it!
Love ya!
Jane |
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| Reviewed by Laura Fall |
9/22/2012 |
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| Such a Lovely poem just beautiful Laura |
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| Reviewed by Morgan Merriweather |
9/22/2012 |
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| just fantastic...you have a broad range....this is lovely. |
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| Reviewed by Roger Wayne Eberle |
9/22/2012 |
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a fine blend of synaesthesia here, Jerry... making the ethereal real...
Roger |
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| Reviewed by Darrell and Kathy Adams |
9/22/2012 |
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Jerry, You're a fool for love! I love you for it. Lovely lovely work. Be well, Kathy
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| Reviewed by Kathleen Janz-Anderson |
9/22/2012 |
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| Your poem exudes a very special love to that someone in your life. Very nice. |
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| Reviewed by Ronald Hull |
9/22/2012 |
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Now this is far from dark. This poem radiates light.
Ron |
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| Reviewed by Regis Auffray |
9/22/2012 |
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Such a lovely and meaningful offering to which I can relate, Jerry. Thank you for sharing. Love and best wishes,
Regis |
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| Reviewed by Janna Hill |
9/22/2012 |
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"dancing upon my soul"
I like that Jerry.
:) Janna |
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| Reviewed by Lily of Lough Neagh C. Dennis-Woosley |
9/22/2012 |
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such wonderfulness in this "weightlessness"
pure energy and oneness withing this liquid
sound Jerry... to float in your own special
place
Beautiful
Love and Light
Lily |
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| Reviewed by Christine Tsen |
9/22/2012 |
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Yes, the voice of a beloved is an intimate experience in itself!
Blessings hope all is well,
Christine |
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| Reviewed by Budd Nelson |
9/22/2012 |
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i wonderful write to one you feel closely connected to my friend
budd |
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| Reviewed by Adriaen Valerius (Reader) |
9/22/2012 |
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This is pure poetry as poetry has to be
A beautiful write Jerry, especially the lines
.the pure joy of you
.dancing upon my soul
I love these lines |
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