|Reviewed by Diana Legun
|The subject of this poem has universal applicability. But I see the crux of this 'dark' is not clock-related; it is there at high noon -- that is subliminally revelatory. Everything about this poem works. ~~ Diana|
|Reviewed by Vivian Dawson
|Beware the madness that conjures
up the darkness *Jerry* for your
days casting shawdows from sun's
|Reviewed by Felix Perry
|Intriguing and deadly story poem...
|Reviewed by Adriaen Valerius (Reader)
|A great Sonnet Jerry, the way you describe your merge with the darkness makes me almost long to experience the same feelings.
|Reviewed by Jane Noponen Perinacci
|This poem gave me shivers as I've always been a bit afraid of the dark yet I long for it like a forbidden lover. Oh, smile that wicked grin!
|Reviewed by Laura Fall
|Oh my this is a deep and dark write and would make a great thriller book as always excellent Laura|
|Reviewed by Lily of Lough Neagh C. Dennis-Woosley
|My goodness Jerry, when in the true physical
dark there is nothing to fear, but the dark
within the mind can be terrifying
Excellent write my wonderful friend
Love and Light
|Reviewed by Budd Nelson
|very dark ny friend
|Reviewed by Christine Alwin
|"This shadow I cling to won't let me fall" I bet you will hold your shadow up as well!..mysterious ..fabulous write!|
|Reviewed by Annabel Sheila
|Oh my!!! This would be a good one to read again on Halloween....think I will....thanks for sharing, Jerry
|Reviewed by Darrell and Kathy Adams
|Oh, Jerry. I feel like we just did a dark and dangerous tango. Wow. I suspect we are darkmates...I hope we are lightmates as well! This was a brave and powerful, gripping piece posessed of a sonnet's grace. Be well, Kathy|
|Reviewed by Ronald Hull
|The bit too vampire-ish for me, but for those that like that genre, probably a thrill.
|Reviewed by pat medlin
|i agree w/ george...had to be a hard one to write...beautiful mastery shows in the capturing of the 'dark'|