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| Reviewed by Diana Legun |
9/27/2012 |
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| The subject of this poem has universal applicability. But I see the crux of this 'dark' is not clock-related; it is there at high noon -- that is subliminally revelatory. Everything about this poem works. ~~ Diana |
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| Reviewed by Vivian Dawson |
9/26/2012 |
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Beware the madness that conjures
up the darkness *Jerry* for your
days casting shawdows from sun's
rays..
Lady Vivian |
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| Reviewed by Felix Perry |
9/25/2012 |
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Intriguing and deadly story poem...
fee |
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| Reviewed by Adriaen Valerius (Reader) |
9/24/2012 |
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A great Sonnet Jerry, the way you describe your merge with the darkness makes me almost long to experience the same feelings.
Excellent write |
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| Reviewed by Jane Noponen Perinacci |
9/24/2012 |
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This poem gave me shivers as I've always been a bit afraid of the dark yet I long for it like a forbidden lover. Oh, smile that wicked grin!
Love ya!
Jane |
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| Reviewed by Laura Fall |
9/24/2012 |
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| Oh my this is a deep and dark write and would make a great thriller book as always excellent Laura |
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| Reviewed by Lily of Lough Neagh C. Dennis-Woosley |
9/24/2012 |
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My goodness Jerry, when in the true physical
dark there is nothing to fear, but the dark
within the mind can be terrifying
Excellent write my wonderful friend
Love and Light
Lily |
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| Reviewed by Budd Nelson |
9/24/2012 |
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very dark ny friend
budd |
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| Reviewed by Christine Alwin |
9/24/2012 |
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| "This shadow I cling to won't let me fall" I bet you will hold your shadow up as well!..mysterious ..fabulous write! |
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| Reviewed by Annabel Sheila |
9/24/2012 |
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Oh my!!! This would be a good one to read again on Halloween....think I will....thanks for sharing, Jerry
Anna |
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| Reviewed by Darrell and Kathy Adams |
9/24/2012 |
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| Oh, Jerry. I feel like we just did a dark and dangerous tango. Wow. I suspect we are darkmates...I hope we are lightmates as well! This was a brave and powerful, gripping piece posessed of a sonnet's grace. Be well, Kathy |
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| Reviewed by Ronald Hull |
9/24/2012 |
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The bit too vampire-ish for me, but for those that like that genre, probably a thrill.
Ron |
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| Reviewed by pat medlin |
9/24/2012 |
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| i agree w/ george...had to be a hard one to write...beautiful mastery shows in the capturing of the 'dark' |
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