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Bright Red
by Tami C Ryan
Saturday, October 14, 2006
Rated "G" by the Author.
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Bright Red

 

sweet melancholic moods
drift downward
like autumnís leaves:
brown
frail
and dead

tears slide
deep into heartís chambers
once alive
risking rustic red

vibrant red lips
absent loveís expression, quiver
slipping naked
neutral
and lifeless
toward winter

underutilized mind
whips silence crazy
like autumnís chill
stirs the bleeding leaves

yet
reminders of your love
breathe life into poetry
your heart speaks
the bright red truth
and, I
alive, now, and dancing
want to live
within your eyes forever







Copyright © 2006 Tami C Ryan



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Reviewed by Richard Orey 4/18/2010
"Bright Red" reminds us of human nature's: "Hope springs eternal."

"and, I, alive, now, and dancing, want to live within your eyes forever."

Love defies the notion of unobtainable immortality!

Richard

Reviewed by Andrew Shipley 1/13/2008
Wonderful imagery and startling contrasts / progressions of colors and moods. Well done.
Reviewed by Rose Rideout 3/8/2007
I really enjoyed this poem and look forward to reading more of your writes.
Rose
Reviewed by Jeanette Cooper 3/3/2007
I love the way your poem starts with "melancholic moods" and progresses toward a happier mood. Nicely done, and looks great in that frame.
Reviewed by Phyllis Jean Green 2/20/2007
L o v e. i t. And you made it look so nice!
S m a s h i n g!! 'Pea' <3
Reviewed by Jean Pike 1/25/2007
I liked this poem very much. I found the imagery to be stunning, and the prose, most meaningful. You have a very nice poetic voice.
Reviewed by La Belle Rouge Poetess Of The Heart 1/10/2007
Tami, Lovely poem, thought provoking and with such vivid imagery.
Reviewed by Barbara Terry 12/17/2006
I like the format of this poem Tami. The wallpaper is very pretty. To live in his eyes forever is so romantic Tami. Thank you for sharing.

Merry Christmas Tami, to you and your family and loved ones, and a very Happy New Year too.

May the Lord Jesus bless you, and those whom you love, and be with you always, and at your side constantly. With much love in my heart, joy to the world, peace on earth, & ((((((((((MANY WONDERFUL SISTERLY HUGGGGSSSS)))))))))), your little sister, Barbie

"If I have to be this girl in me, Then I have the right to be."
Reviewed by E. Richardson 11/17/2006
lovely...absolutely love...classical romance with a subtle hint of sensuality...very well done my friend.
Reviewed by Poetess of The Soul Sheila G 11/10/2006
YOu so inspire dear Sweet Tami! Thank you for sharing this Beauty! WArm HuGs, Sheeeoxxo
Reviewed by Chuck Keller 11/1/2006
He's a lucky man! Great poem, Kiddo.
Reviewed by Elizabeth Taylor (Reader) 10/30/2006
Tami, this is exquisite.

Elizabeth
Reviewed by Joseph* OneLight*ģ 10/16/2006
And so it is ... the light springs forth from the darkness.

Love & Light,
Joseph
Reviewed by Cliff Chandler 10/16/2006
Tami, your gift of words inspire us.

Cliff
Reviewed by Chanti Niven 10/15/2006
Precious friend,
Red is the colour of passion and you're certainly not lacking that but in this write I am reminded of a movie that was shot in black and white except for a young girl in a scarlet coat. The contrast of this little girl's coat was what made the bleak horror of the movie that much more effective. In this I feel like I'm seeing your life blood in print. You have an incredible heart, so filled with love and I pray that all you desire comes to you in abundance.
Love Chanti
Reviewed by Edwin Larson 10/15/2006
Excellent write where the colors of fall merge with the depth of love.

Reviewed by jude forese 10/14/2006
this is truly a beautiful poem, Tami ...
Reviewed by Regis Auffray 10/14/2006
Lovely sentiments beautifully expressed, Tami. Thank you for sharing them. Love and peace to you,

Regis
Reviewed by Sherry Heim 10/14/2006
ohhh this is so smooth and rich, Tami. Beautiful!
Take care,
Sherry
Reviewed by Aberjhani 10/14/2006
Flows with the crimson warmth of deep yearning and the brilliant flames of quietly vibrant passion. Absorbing work.
Aberjhani
Reviewed by CJ Heck 10/14/2006
Very nice, Tami -- I especially love the last verse, "and, I
alive, now, and dancing
want to live
within your eyes forever."
Lovely!
My warmest regards,
CJ
Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader) 10/14/2006
Must keep the mind active.
Well if it's meant to be, it's going to be..
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