|Reviewed by ~Indigo~ Elga
Your words flow just like the waterfall, beautifully soft and alluring. The following lines are quite exquisite, and so full of meaning. Thank you for sharing this beautiful poem.
"Ships crash on the reefs of your love
Survivors fall prey to the pirates of your eyes
The lotus on your lips enslaves the rest
Those who have passed the previous test"
|Reviewed by Shezray Faisal
|This is lovely! Yes love gives one the feeling of witnessing a magnificent waterfall!
|Reviewed by Aftab Khaskheli
|when i read massod's this poetry, my heart is ful of motion, realy
i enjoy when i read massod's poetry or artical. i hope massod will
carry his best poetry
|Reviewed by Chanti Niven
This is an exquisite poem, filled with insight and beauty. Your writing seems to flow easily from you. I will be looking forward to reading more of your poetry and being inspired.
|Reviewed by Gracie McKeever
|Wow, I like this a lot. Simple, to the point, yet profound. Well-done!|
|Reviewed by Sara Coslett
|waterfalls can be both dangerous and refreshing...much like love. ~ sara|
|Reviewed by Jane Rodway
|This flows really well, and it is a lovely poem. The last three lines are really well done, especially the one about the pirates, very original.|
|Reviewed by Amy Lynn Kampmier
|I absolutely love this, very romantic and full of heart.|
|Reviewed by Rene' Bennett
|I really like the theme you use here and continue to use the flow of water as the flow of love. And as flowing water, never knowing in which direction it will lead you. Excellent thought as well as imagery.
|Reviewed by Ch'erie de Perrot
|A very loving sensual way of expressing your love for your lady, well done.
|Reviewed by Tracey L. O' Very (Reader)
|Really romantic and a love held high for her. Really beautiful way to express your undying love.
|Reviewed by Regis Auffray
|Passionate and loving! Great offering, Masood. Thank you for sharing. Love and peace to you. Regis|
|Reviewed by Lady Peg (Reader)
|beautiful poem for your lady!|
|Reviewed by na na (Reader)
|Excellent! Very well written. Bill Murray|
|Reviewed by Kevin Mc Crum (Reader)
|excellent write. Very passioned.|
|Reviewed by Debashish Haar (Reader)
|BRILLIANT work, exquisite word canvas is this page, Poet!|