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Masood Lohar

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Your love is like a water fall!!
by Masood Lohar

Wednesday, March 17, 2004
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Your love is like a water fall!
Magnificent, spread and tall
Smoothly flowing from the stone walls
It sings, dances and crawls
The flow will take me I donít know where
Neither I want to know, nor I can dare
Will it take me to some river?
An ocean, a lake or a gutter?
All I want is to float in there
Just alone and donít wana share

Your love is like an ocean!
Deep, silent and full of motion
I canít swim to the other side
Nor I can get a boatís ride
All I see is sweeping off by tides
From the shores of wisdom to the blissís prides
Ships crash on the reefs of your love
Survivors fall prey to the pirates of your eyes
The lotus on your lips enslaves the rest
Those who have passed the previous test
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Reviewed by ~Indigo~ Elga 7/21/2005
Dear Masood,

Your words flow just like the waterfall, beautifully soft and alluring. The following lines are quite exquisite, and so full of meaning. Thank you for sharing this beautiful poem.

"Ships crash on the reefs of your love
Survivors fall prey to the pirates of your eyes
The lotus on your lips enslaves the rest
Those who have passed the previous test"

Warm hugs
Elga
Reviewed by Shezray Faisal 7/12/2005
This is lovely! Yes love gives one the feeling of witnessing a magnificent waterfall!
~Shezray
Reviewed by Aftab Khaskheli 4/19/2005
when i read massod's this poetry, my heart is ful of motion, realy
i enjoy when i read massod's poetry or artical. i hope massod will
carry his best poetry
Reviewed by Chanti Niven 4/8/2005
Dear Masood,
This is an exquisite poem, filled with insight and beauty. Your writing seems to flow easily from you. I will be looking forward to reading more of your poetry and being inspired.
Thank you!
Chanti
Reviewed by Gracie McKeever 3/10/2005
Wow, I like this a lot. Simple, to the point, yet profound. Well-done!
Reviewed by Sara Coslett 2/4/2005
waterfalls can be both dangerous and refreshing...much like love. ~ sara
Reviewed by Jane Rodway 2/1/2005
This flows really well, and it is a lovely poem. The last three lines are really well done, especially the one about the pirates, very original.
Reviewed by Amy Lynn Kampmier 1/30/2005
I absolutely love this, very romantic and full of heart.
Reviewed by Rene' Bennett 1/16/2005
I really like the theme you use here and continue to use the flow of water as the flow of love. And as flowing water, never knowing in which direction it will lead you. Excellent thought as well as imagery.

Rene'
Reviewed by Ch'erie de Perrot 1/13/2005
A very loving sensual way of expressing your love for your lady, well done.

Smiles
Ch'erie
Reviewed by Tracey L. O' Very (Reader) 12/12/2004
Really romantic and a love held high for her. Really beautiful way to express your undying love.
Tracey
Reviewed by Regis Auffray 6/5/2004
Passionate and loving! Great offering, Masood. Thank you for sharing. Love and peace to you. Regis
Reviewed by Lady Peg (Reader) 3/17/2004
beautiful poem for your lady!
Reviewed by na na (Reader) 3/17/2004
Excellent! Very well written. Bill Murray
Reviewed by Kevin Mc Crum (Reader) 3/17/2004
excellent write. Very passioned.
Reviewed by Debashish Haar (Reader) 3/17/2004
BRILLIANT work, exquisite word canvas is this page, Poet!
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