|Reviewed by J M
|Frustration it is overwhelming this is full of wise words.|
|Reviewed by ~Indigo~ Elga
A play on words? nevertheless, either way a wise and sound composition with much to think about Masood. A good write.
|Reviewed by Tracey L. O' Very (Reader)
|Wow. You really captured this emotion. Very, very good. Perfection!
Peaceful Days everyday for you and your family,
|Reviewed by Nicole Davis Vergara (Reader)
|<Smack> yep this one's powerful truth and wisdom just smacked me right upside the head...EXCELLANCE!!!!
|Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado
|very good write! well done, masood! :) (((HUGS))) and love, your new friend in america, karen lynn.|
|Reviewed by Erica Ivory
|In the haze of work I saw
The elixir of self was raw
Creativity of mind was fluctuating
And the strength of self was nothing
Frustration broken down to it's basic element.. Great write