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| Reviewed by Thomasena Martin-Johnson |
4/29/2012 |
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My mother told me, "if they know you, they will like you; if they don't, it dosent matter."
The flow in your poem is excellent. |
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| Reviewed by Joyce Bell |
4/17/2012 |
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| REFLECTING ON THE ONLY 'ONE' WHO POSSESSES THIS KIND OF LOVE. THANKS FOR SHARING. LOVE, BLESSINGS AND FAITH...JOYCE(MOM)HIS INSPIRATIONS |
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| Reviewed by John Flanagan |
9/7/2010 |
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"...because of my love for all things..." is the heart of the message, the inner truth Asa has discovered and once discovered never leaves.
This is fine work.
John |
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| Reviewed by Inspire Hope |
10/16/2009 |
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Amen! Amen! Asa this speaks volumes of the Love
Jesus! A very powerful write!
Much Love
Always! |
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| Reviewed by Dawn Anderson |
10/15/2009 |
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| Parts of this make me think of Jesus and his sacrificing His life so that we may have eternal life. This is a profound piece that says so much more than any of us can begin to understand, I think. |
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| Reviewed by Janet Caldwell |
10/11/2009 |
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The man has it down!!!
Janet xx |
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| Reviewed by Janice Springs Hamilton |
10/10/2009 |
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| ...and I am at peace with myself... what a wonderful place to be! JBS |
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| Reviewed by MaryGrace Patterson |
10/10/2009 |
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| To look beyond and see the inner person is sometimes hard to do. If a person can get past the outer being and look into the soul , they can learn much ! There is a lot to think about in this poem written with wisdom and compassion! ....M |
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| Reviewed by Richard Arrington |
10/9/2009 |
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| When you find "my love for all things." you find internal peace. |
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| Reviewed by Christine Alwin |
10/7/2009 |
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| Timing is everything they say, much to ponder here. |
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| Reviewed by Georg Mateos |
10/7/2009 |
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"a righteous man can throw the first stone..." or keep his friends close to his chest and his enemies...closer.
Georg
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| Reviewed by Louisa Dobbins |
10/6/2009 |
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| I would give my life for even my enemy! |
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