|Reviewed by MaryGrace Patterson
|To lok into one's inner being is sometimes hard to do. You have found the key to open locked doors. Good for you!...M|
|Reviewed by Odin Roark
|Assuming a non-political bent for the poem (Dog help us if "The Right" take over our lives) this rouses in the reader his or her own sense of history, his or her own sense of trail blazing, ever cautious with bushwhacking into the questionable safety, but never fearful of discovery. Change. How inevitable for those of conscious living. Again, you provided nourishment for the mind. Thank you.|
|Reviewed by Darrell and Kathy Adams
|You are an extraordinary poet to draw from deeply painful, yet obviously growth experiences, process them and put them out there for us to benefit from. Thank you. Be well, Kathy|
|Reviewed by Linda Hill
I love all your poem but the last two lines says it all. Having gone left all my life...it was time...to go right. You can, my friend. With alot of faith and the love and support of your Mom (which you have) A new life awaits. God bless you always.
|Reviewed by Frieda Groffy
|a very strong poem! you are a 'soul poet' so just keep writing!|
|Reviewed by Carolyn Dye
|ASA', OMG love this it speaks to my heart and feel ever word you wrote. keep writing and doing What God called you to do.|
|Reviewed by Mickey Mantle Fortin
|Asa...release the inner spirit that lives with every beat of your heart and every breath that you take. Be true to who and what you are now and learn but not live in the past. This is your test, your character, your strength your weakness, no one else but you. If you think you can, you can; and if you think you can't then surely you can't: its all up to you! Stay strong my brother from another mother.|
|Reviewed by John Domino
Follow your vision and you'll do just fine.
Put Christ in everything you say and do and you'll go far.
You got what it takes because you have seen the sun over the horizon.
You will never return to darkness and hopelessness again.
|Reviewed by William Bonilla
|wish you all the luck
peace be with you
|Reviewed by Regis Auffray
|It is never too late and your positive outlook is half "the battle." Love and blessings to you,
|Reviewed by Jane Noponen Perinacci
|Mature thinking here. He is being mindful. Go, Asa!!Good for you!!
|Reviewed by Laurel Lamperd
|Great poem, Asa. You have tasted the depths now you are on your way to sunshine and laughter. Rainbows|
|Reviewed by Thomasena Martin-Johnson
|Forgive yourself. Recognize where you went wrong. Dont shop at the "thrift Store" Go to the High end District. I like your poem.|
|Reviewed by Lily of Lough Neagh C. Dennis-Woosley
|Let me explain something, more than likely this is true. Our visions are a peak into our past. When we can reconcile our past we can face our future and face all head on. Beautiful write, what a talented insightful young man.
Love and Light
|Reviewed by Elizabeth Russo
|It is good to remember our errors, our missteps. And it is good to have faith and hope that you will turn things around. Never give up. God bless. ~Best, Elizabeth|
|Reviewed by Mary Ann Biddinger
|Asa ~ Your goals are steadfast and strong. Your character
in poetic flair and rythum for blessings to be.
Lady Mary Ann
|Reviewed by Ronald Hull
|And we are not talking about political parties, are we?
|Reviewed by Laura Fall
|A deeply moving poem Laura
|Reviewed by Christine Alwin
|From the inside out, from the outside in...when they meet it all comes together..moving poem~|
|Reviewed by Amor Sabor
|This next time you may really have the strength to stay out for good...you know our Creator loves us and his son taught us how to be humble and be forgiven.|
|Reviewed by Christine Tsen
|Your poetic voice reveals guidance towards harmony and rejuvenation ~
|Reviewed by jude forese
|Believe in youself and your potential is limitless ...|
|Reviewed by pat medlin
|'redemtion song...this is your song of freedom'
write write write! asa keep writing....so much gain from it...for everyone
|Reviewed by Clarence Prince
|Remember this: With God all things are possible; then, just put your trust in Him; He will forgive you of your sin and keep you out of jail. Just trust Him, Asa!|
|Reviewed by Carol Mitchell
|Beautiful poem. Redemption is for all. May God bless and keep you always. Loved your heartfelt words.|
|Reviewed by Ruan Mills Burke
|Right behind you, Asa. Getting life on track makes everything else so much easier.|