|Reviewed by Kate Burnside
|Sounds like takin a breather from the "party from hell", then having to go back inside cos it's still an hour before the rest of your friends want to go home! I remember that one!! :)) Adore the stanza: "There is a cold ocean outside raw sunlight dives into the waves The air and water are frigid"... again, know plenty of that living in England!! Excellent visual poetry as always. Bless you and thank you. Kate xx|
|Reviewed by E T Waldron
|Wow! The visual in this one are dark but poetent and tell the story in both word and image! Superb poem Janet!
Thanks for thoughts and prayers!
|Reviewed by jude forese
|we search through the darkness of dreams to find a glimmer of light and when we do it's time to start all over again ...
luv the stark yet subtle imagery ...
|Reviewed by Pamela Kimmell
|Our dreams are very "telling" of things that are on our mind...we all have our darker dreams I think - sometimes we know why, and sometimes we don't WANT to know why. Well written piece Janet.|
|Reviewed by Felix Perry
|Interesting and intense and as dreams go scary but no doubt it has a great signifigance to your life. Great write Janet though dark.
|Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader)
|Freud would love this one.|
|Reviewed by A PAX
|A nightmare of the endless loop
who has not been there?