Where Will You Be?
by Diana J Legun
Thursday, May 31, 2012
Rated "G" by the Author.
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I've just returned from Washigton DC, attending my son's grad school graduation from Johns Hopkins University. This is written to him and his Master's Degree in International Relations. |
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(photo taken by me from the plane May 26, 2012)
Where Will You Be?
I am in the sky now.
Where are you on
that painter's tarp
below this flying steel?
Wrapped or tangled,
draped or smothered,
hovered in hesitant wait
for obstacles
or little brown squirrels,
or dashing in haste
to another meeting place?
Where, in the space
of small dots and smears
do your important
steps appear?
Where do your
glossy gazes fix
this, my moment
of white sky?
Upon the crowds pressing by?
On the flashing lights
that decorate screaming sirens,
or the tiny sparrow whose voice
can yes be heard above
the shatter, as she sings
from a hedge twig that swings
along the sidewalk to everywhere
in the land of nowhere?
Or is maybe your attention
on this or that which happened
or didn't, will or won't or
could maybe still
if this or that occurs
or doesn't? And maybe
then on the scruffy lump of a
blind beggarman
with extended cup in hand
and close beside him
on a brusky red blanket,
a small German Shepherd
watching you with blue-white eyes
that say I didn't ask to be here -- man
who, as you pass looking straight ahead,
thinks, 'Nice haircut there.'?
Where will you be
when hot winds burn
through tunnels of tall concrete
with a fire that can incinerate all
or ignite and inspire
brilliant minds
to invent peace?
Where will you be?
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| Reviewed by Ronald Hull |
6/3/2012 |
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One hell of a challenge! I hope he'll be up to it.
Ron |
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| Reviewed by Kate Burnside |
6/3/2012 |
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| The God's-eye view, Diana! I, too, have these kinds of thoughts in-flight but could scarce put pen so admirably to paper about it. I guess having the muse and specificity of your son and his chosen specialism gives the anchor and pinpoint to the write from which all the larger worldview concepts stem. I very much like how you hold the tension of thoughts between the overarching global concerns and the small detail of life which surrounds us. I love feeling suspended in this way. Great writing, thank you. xx |
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| Reviewed by Lily of Lough Neagh C. Dennis-Woosley |
6/1/2012 |
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Where will you be, the same we have even asked of ourselves.
Lovely Diana, he will also ask this years from now for his own children.
Love and Light
Lily |
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| Reviewed by Odin Roark |
6/1/2012 |
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| Like the Charles and Ray Eames documentary "Powers of Ten" your 3rd eye seeks to penetrate the atmosphere of "apparentness" and reveal an inner conscience zooming earthward, absorbing the energies of nature and existence in order to make visible the white light of blinding peace. Beautiful! |
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| Reviewed by richard cederberg |
6/1/2012 |
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Nicely conceptualized and imaged. Your poetic voice is a bracing susurrus of forest breezes. Peace to you ... richard
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| Reviewed by dan Rosenhagen |
6/1/2012 |
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Very nice perspective that you present this thought from. A picure filled with insignificant colors and shapes that many adhere to.
And where are you in this picture, you ask. Why I am standing on a rock, flying around a sphere of fire, I say. Oh yes, and standing up here next to you I am. Great piece Diana, Nice to see you back.;-) |
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| Reviewed by Annabel Sheila |
6/1/2012 |
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Wow! Powerful write, Diana! Lots to chew on here and I love that pic! Well done...
Anna |
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| Reviewed by Jerry Bolton |
6/1/2012 |
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| Words to muse and to take to heart for your son. |
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