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Multiline Drawing Four
by Diana J Legun

Thursday, August 16, 2012
Rated "G" by the Author.
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Where is pity

when looking upon

completeness

 

djl 

 


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Reviewed by Vivian Dawson 8/17/2012
Necessity being the
Mother of Invention!

Lady Vivian
Reviewed by Odin Roark 8/16/2012
What's arresting about this compilation of 7 words is its inherent circular nature and suggestion that "completeness" is so very personal.
Reviewed by pat medlin 8/16/2012
hmmm....am thinking....(that's a good thing)
Reviewed by Budd Nelson 8/16/2012
just the right words to compell deeper thought
budd
Reviewed by Jerry Bolton 8/16/2012
My thoughts are whirling as I try to decipher the ku. If whatever it is is completed, and there is nothing left to do for or with it, and it still looks like something out of a Rube Goldberg (dating myself heah) design, then I can understand the pity.
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