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More Like Wild...
|Reviewed by Ronald Hull
|I love the premise and the wording like "outside inside beside "is incredible! However, I always thought that rib story was very demeaning to women and purposely written by men as masters rather than as equals.
Of course most men prefer to have their women think that they are only a rib off the old blowhard.
|Reviewed by Ed Matlack
|Well, Eve, I hope Adam really does it for you, so just don't partake of the apple & the world and you will be in a better place...if not...? -e-|
|Reviewed by CHANTI LACE
|wow...wonderful writing sweet lady....love the picture...
|Reviewed by Michael Schafer
|God mad the world and he rested.
God made man and he rested.
then God made woman, and since no ones rested.
|Reviewed by Regis Auffray
|Nicely done, Jane. Your verses bring back vivid memories and experiences therefrom arisen from them. Thank you for sharing. Love and best wishes to you,
|Reviewed by Jeff Mason
|Who needs sheets?! Time started but, if all things are just right, time stands still... and that's when you know everything is just right!|
|Reviewed by Jerry Bolton
|From his rib, indeed. You reached out and grabbed me with this one, Jane. Love it and you are very good at "laying it on the line." Superb poetry!|