|Reviewed by lois christensen
|Awesome write- thinking about it here.
|Reviewed by William Bonilla
most enjoyable read
Peace be with you
|Reviewed by Jerry Bolton
|Powerful love. Even more powerful commitment. Therein lies the beauty.|
|Reviewed by Asa Seeley
|i look at this two ways. one way is; asa wishes he was the recipient of this kind of love. the other way is; there should be only 'one' recipeint of this kind of love. thanks
|Reviewed by Budd Nelson
deep inner feelings, nicely written, more please.
|Reviewed by Ronald Hull
|A good start for a song.
|Reviewed by Christine Tsen
|This is powerful, Shirley, and I admire your poetic maneuvers of style here ~