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One flesh cannot be separated...
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Without you/
there is no me/
I am incomplete/
set adrift/
on storm ravaged seas/
please/
take me in your arms/
again/
the place where I breathe/
without you/
there/
is/
no/
me/
without U/
I cease to be
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| Reviewed by William Bonilla |
6/19/2012 |
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Beautifully composed
most enjoyable read
Peace be with you
William |
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| Reviewed by Jerry Bolton |
6/19/2012 |
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| Powerful love. Even more powerful commitment. Therein lies the beauty. |
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| Reviewed by Asa Seeley |
6/18/2012 |
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i look at this two ways. one way is; asa wishes he was the recipient of this kind of love. the other way is; there should be only 'one' recipeint of this kind of love. thanks
asa |
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| Reviewed by Budd Nelson |
6/14/2012 |
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Shirley,
deep inner feelings, nicely written, more please.
Budd |
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| Reviewed by Ronald Hull |
6/14/2012 |
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A good start for a song.
Ron |
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| Reviewed by Christine Tsen |
6/14/2012 |
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This is powerful, Shirley, and I admire your poetic maneuvers of style here ~
Christine |
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