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Misled in love, the wall of protection is erected yet again!
over took musical fantasies/
into the valves of a fragrant vessel/
in the crevices of an ocean cave/
listening to echoes reverberating facsimiles/
over a lifetime of moments/
where promises were made/
& burst like bubbles/
on the crest of the waves/
an orchestrated farewell she neither expected/
in the midst of maroon/
that drowned loveliness/
& renewed mistrust/
beause she must/
not be played again
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|Reviewed by William Bonilla
|Beautifully composed a pleasure to read
love & Peace be with you
|Reviewed by Mary Ann Biddinger
A unique poem of compelling emotions orchestrated in
"Musical Fantasies." Accolades to you.
Lady Mary Ann
|Reviewed by Ronald Hull
|An ocean of emotion so beautifully rendered in this poem.
|Reviewed by Edward Phillips
|Nicely written, Shirley. You have given us a view of what lies on the other side of that "wallof mistrust," and it looks oh so enchanting!|
|Reviewed by Budd Nelson
|excellent Shirley yes Deborah is right
|Reviewed by D. Vaineo
|WoW Oh WoW, Shirley...you have topped yourself.
This is one of your best!