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Cleaned by Ed Matlack Saturday, September 04, 2004 Rated "R" by the Author. Share Print Save Become a Fan
Cleaned… Clean that pipe, Make it right, So when I light, The smoke does go to my brain; yes right… Take out the screen, Burnt on the thumb, Let out a scream, Wish I were numb, Instead of just dumb… Pack it with fresh, Right to the top, nothing less, Damn no fire, I just bought this lighter, Apparently from a thieving blighter… Take a deep breath, all the way in, fill up those lungs, If I get high enough I will be able to speak in tongues, Just one more hit, just one more rung, And I will be ready to relax and have some fun… © ~ poppywrittED ~ 9/4/04

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Reviewed by Tinka Boukes	9/9/2004

I think I need that pipe to catch up on reading you ,,Hello I am Backkk!! Missed you!! Love Tinka




Reviewed by Katy Walsvik	9/5/2004

Just when I think I have a definite favorite among your many delights... along comes one to bump to the top! This is not just hilarious, it's a wonderfully flowing "mural" of phrasings. If your original thrust to write poetry was to do it 'til I get it right'... you have done it long ago and just keep getting better! You rhyme with panache, Eddie M. Now, then, herein it says you burned your finger... hmmmm... outside, you get stung. Inside, you get burned. May I suggest a nice condo on the moon? (grinning with gusto!) hehe... Carry on, you poet, you.. katy xox.




Reviewed by Michael Charles Messineo	9/5/2004

Ed, 4:20 good buddy.... ...Michael




Reviewed by Lori Moore	9/4/2004

Cute write.




Reviewed by Lee Garrett	9/4/2004

Good poem, but it makes me wonder what you're smoking in that pipe.




Reviewed by Amelia Peterson (Reader)	9/4/2004

The icons really do add to the humor here... Amy




Reviewed by Michelle Close Mills	9/4/2004

Fire up that Bong and let's party!!! Your emoticons add so much to this piece Ed!!!! It's a really fun piece. Michelle