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| Reviewed by Patrick Granfors |
6/12/2012 |
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| We the jury of your peers find the defendant not of sound mind but since when did that ever matter. cuz p |
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| Reviewed by jude forese |
6/11/2012 |
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| sounds like a busy day ... |
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| Reviewed by Annabel Sheila |
6/11/2012 |
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Amazing how you told such an indepth story with so few words! giggle...this is soooo cute, Ed!Thanks for the chuckle...
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| Reviewed by Mr. Ed |
6/11/2012 |
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| Ma says she saw you sleepin on a bus stop bench near Atlantic City. Look in the bushes behind it; she left you a bus token. |
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| Reviewed by Regis Auffray |
6/10/2012 |
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There's no place like home. Take care, my friend. Love and peace,
Regis |
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| Reviewed by Jane Noponen Perinacci |
6/10/2012 |
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You just got done with a game of hide and seek with yourself!! Cool words!
Love ya!
Jane |
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| Reviewed by Lois Christensen |
6/10/2012 |
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Well well, you're here again, welcome back.
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| Reviewed by Kay P Devenish |
6/10/2012 |
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You make me smile... glad your words are here and not lost with you.
Love to you and yours
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Kay |
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| Reviewed by Lily of Lough Neagh C. Dennis-Woosley |
6/10/2012 |
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Oh my goodness! But love your play with words! I think we found you :)
Love and Light
Lily |
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| Reviewed by Darrell and Kathy Adams |
6/10/2012 |
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I like it. Fun, expressive and minimalistic to boot. Less is more quite often. Be well, Kathy
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| Reviewed by Felix Perry |
6/10/2012 |
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Short but definately Edish in humour.
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| Reviewed by Kate Burnside |
6/10/2012 |
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| Love it... stumbled a bit over the four-letter "F"-word in the visual, but the poem was a great exercise in precision and concision and was extremely well accomplished. The whole of life flashing before your eyes in just 14 words... You could put this out as a challenge! :)) xx |
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| Reviewed by Jerry Bolton |
6/10/2012 |
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| I hope you get home without a wreck. I didn't today. Dammit! |
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| Reviewed by Laura Fall |
6/10/2012 |
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Perfect rhyming and flow in this cleverly written poem Laura
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| Reviewed by Budd Nelson |
6/10/2012 |
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Ed,
I hope you got there safe and sound.
Budd |
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