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| Reviewed by Tom Hyland |
6/13/2012 |
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IF A 'WUSS' IS SO PROFOUNDLY 'LOST-ED' ...
HE MUST NEEDS A WOMAN ...
TO KEEP HIM BOSS-ED .... |
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| Reviewed by Patrick Granfors |
6/12/2012 |
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| You must live in a tough neighborhood. A coroner on every corner. cuz p |
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| Reviewed by Paul Berube |
6/12/2012 |
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| Just say it from your heart, my friend. |
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| Reviewed by Jerry Bolton |
6/12/2012 |
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| Muse's are overrated. It is YOU. You are the one, and you'll do whatever it rakes to turn that corner. When you finally do Ed will still be there, just where you left him. |
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| Reviewed by Lily of Lough Neagh C. Dennis-Woosley |
6/12/2012 |
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Hmmm sounds like your teetering on the edge there, I think I will be an observer in group and take notes :)
Your light always shines even if your muse has run aground Ed
Always give me a smile with anything you write
Love and Light
Lily |
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| Reviewed by Budd Nelson |
6/12/2012 |
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ED,
Darkness does have its own vibrations.
Budd |
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| Reviewed by Lois Christensen |
6/11/2012 |
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Astounding darkness in this come back to earth, Ed.
Been there, done that, not fun at all, can relate to this poem very well. glood one.
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| Reviewed by Debby Rosenberg |
6/11/2012 |
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| the body is like a car...something you ride around in...upkeep is optional to the owner |
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| Reviewed by Jane Noponen Perinacci |
6/11/2012 |
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Far out underground material!
Love ya!
Jane |
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| Reviewed by JASMIN HORST SEILER |
6/11/2012 |
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| Letting the hash out of your words man, you don't need them there pills, a straight jacket maybe hugs! |
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| Reviewed by * Starman * * |
6/11/2012 |
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Flung beings form interesting soul-mates, once they finally meet. Your muse and you of course, when it is being amusing here by letting you hash out your words, without knowing it was really, you, the Jersey Devil creating it all along. No pal, you have created a fine piece that reflects your wit and personality and pleasantly done. This is an enjoyably light poem, even the cursive, which I found had a nice touch, eh, e? Nope you have not lost a thing.
Starman
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