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Obsessed by Annette Gisby
by Annette Gisby

Monday, May 21, 2001

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What obsession can lead to

OBSESSED

by Annette Gisby © 2001

I want to caress you,
I want to possess you,
I never want to let you go.

I want to touch you,
I want to crush you,
I never want to let you go.

I want to hear you crying next to me,
I want to feel you dying next to me,
I never want to let you go.

END

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Reviewed by Carl Rafala 7/12/2001
The poem--true to its title--grips onto that very thing it tries to explain: obsession, with its strange compulsions and destructive short-slightness. Very nicely done.
Reviewed by Janet Caldwell 6/24/2001
I love this poem and feel that it needs no explanation. It can be interpreted 1,000 ways. It's up to us as readers. Excellent! JC
Reviewed by 6/18/2001
Haunting and thought provoking.

Kristie Leigh Maguire
Author of Desert Triangle
Reviewed by Josh Jenks 5/21/2001
"I want to crush you," sort of confused me. Like physically crush or break somebody's heart? Yes, obsession is probably not a bad thing sometimes but love is, for the most part, some sort of obsession =/ I guess I can say I have felt most of these "obsession" feelings although I don't WANT to feel her dying but I will be there when it happens or she will for me. Nice, sharp poem -- only real problem with it, to me, is that it seems pretty cliché of a topic?
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