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| Reviewed by Denise Edwards |
11/19/2008 |
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| "with my words scattered all over the floor, trying to sweep up the oness to sweep you away"...Priceless! A fantastic poem, Jim! |
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| Reviewed by C. Nichols |
10/11/2008 |
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| I really loved this poem, very visual, very figurally descriptive, excellent write |
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| Reviewed by Lois Christensen |
9/30/2008 |
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| Good yearnings to pass onto all of us. You will find the way, just hang in there with all the love you have to give and pass around. |
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| Reviewed by Karen Palumbo |
9/24/2008 |
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How sweetly expressed are your desires from the heart...
Be always safe,
Karen |
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| Reviewed by Darryn Murphy |
9/24/2008 |
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| Beautiful, Lovely write with great Heart, I enjoyed it |
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| Reviewed by Tinka Boukes |
9/24/2008 |
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An absolutely most beautiful yearning write!!
Love Tinka |
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| Reviewed by Susan Smith |
9/24/2008 |
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| Your poem brings to mind the words of King Solomon: There be three things which are too wonderful for me, yea, four which I know not: The way of an eagle in the air; the way of a serpent upon a rock; the way of a ship in the midst of the sea; and the way of a man with a maid. (Proverbs 30:18&19) |
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