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Fly On Your Wall
by Crystal-Rain Love

Saturday, July 17, 2004
Rated "G" by the Author.
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If only I could be a fly on your wall,

I could keep you in my sight without your knowing,

adoring you freely without fear or shame,

but alas,

you would eventually find and crush me.


If only I could be the stars you look up to when the night unfolds,

I would appear bright and unattainable,

A true beauty to behold,

Something you could only fantasize about touching,

but alas,

You would forget all about me by morning.


If only I could be the sheets that cover your body,

able to touch and caress every part of you,

hold you every night,

keeping you warm like no other,

but alas,

You would only toss me aside at the sight of a new dawn.


If only I could be the air you breathe,

filling you with my all each day,

you would need me like none other,

take me in time and time again,

but alas,

you wouldn't even realize it.


If only I could show you what I feel,

tell you what's in my heart,

bare my soul,

kiss your lips,

and confess all the desire I've locked away inside,

offer myself to you completely,

but alas,

You would only crush me,

like a fly on your wall.



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Reviewed by Edwin Hurdle 9/17/2008
A refreshing poem with a lot of creative images.I like this poem a lot,take care

Reviewed by Aubrey Hammack 10/17/2007
Your images are really good in this. Good write.
Reviewed by Janet Parker 3/4/2005
This is so imaginative. I really like the way you brought the beginning around to the end.
Reviewed by Handsum Hart 7/29/2004
Oh what a poetic fly you are. Uncrushable I'd say.
Well written!!!

Joy and starlight
Reviewed by Regis Auffray 7/18/2004
Rain. You sweetie. This is wonderful and a joy to read you again. I feel privileged to be your friend from BC, Canada. Love and peace to you. Regis
Reviewed by Lisa Hilbers 7/18/2004
Beautifully written to perfection. Very tender and heartfelt piece of work.
A bit sad though but the subject never gives up on their dreams. Excellent.

Reviewed by jude forese 7/17/2004
a really well constructed poem with some very pliable images ...
Reviewed by Anthony Hall 7/17/2004
Crystal, wonderfully evocative and imagined! Clear visuals and emotions of unrequited love...
Reviewed by Jeff Mason 7/17/2004
nice to see you posting again. this is absolutely splendid, in its candor, and in its outright honesty of emotion. very nicely done.

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