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Scene From A Wedding
by Crystal-Rain Love

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The music plays softly

As the groom stands there, awaiting his true love.

He is as beautiful as the first time I laid eyes on him

Itís not that often that a man can be described as beautiful

But, it is the only word befitting him

As he stands in his black and white tux at the end of the aisle.

The flower girl sprinkles her petals as she glides towards him

The corners of his mouth turn up in anxious joy

The day he has dreamt of has come

The thrill of it all is written on his face

Everyone turns as his bride appears

I am the only one who can see his eyes watering with joy

The music fades out as the two hearts are joined together

And as he lifts his brideís veil to show the world his trophy

A lone tear falls from my eye.

It should have been me.


copyright (c)2004 Crystal-Rain Love

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Reviewed by Floria Kelderhouse (Reader) 1/11/2004
Oh this is lovely Crystal...sad yet.....I just love the ending....floria
Reviewed by Retta (Reindeer) Mckenzie 1/10/2004
Ah me...This was so lovely and so sad, beautifully written,

Reviewed by Bhuwan Thapaliya 1/10/2004
Excellent saving this in my file....clap clap n luck....BHUWAN
Reviewed by E T Waldron 1/9/2004
oooooh that hurts...Excellent write,deeply felt...
Reviewed by Ashraf Goreja (Reader) 1/9/2004
Quite nice indeed.

Reviewed by Zenith Elliott 1/9/2004
Excellent work, Crystral! ~Z~
Reviewed by Tinka Boukes 1/9/2004
Excelent Crystal!!

Welcome to my page!!

Love Tinka
Reviewed by Handsum Hart 1/8/2004
beautiful work, very gripping
maybe in the long run, your soulmate wasn't meant to be him

best wishes
Reviewed by Kate Clifford 1/7/2004
Such a sad ending! Beautifully written!!!!
Reviewed by Carolyn Red Bear (The Bear Paw) 1/7/2004
Rain, you know how to make a heart stir....I love how you put this together... very well laid out... (and I wish it were you, too) smiles...
In Spirit,
Reviewed by Regis Auffray 1/7/2004
Aw, Rain! Once again you manage to bring tears to my eyes. A beautifully moving poetic expression. Thank you. Love and peace, Regis.
Reviewed by Simon Thurlow (Reader) 1/7/2004
Wonderful blending of imagery and emotion
Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader) 1/7/2004
A bitter pill. but a lovely poem..
Reviewed by Paul Berube 1/7/2004
Crystal, very fitting ending. You seemed to have shown the most emotion. Your imagery was very beautiful and endearing.

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