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Time To End The Story
by Crystal-Rain Love

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What once was so bright, alive and vivid

Has faded into a blurred image,

A mere memory hanging on for nostalgiaís sake.

The struggle to hold on has grown too tiresome.

I feel the need to open my hands

And let it fly free.

I knew in my heart that he was the one

I thought that fact would hold true

We have changed so much with the passing of time

This man that once was part of me,

Has now become almost a stranger.

I donít understand why it still hurts

Leaving should feel so exhilarating

Yet I still feel the pain of loss,

As if part of me is dying.

But the flame has burned out

And Iíve lost the desire to rekindle it.

Itís time to amputate for the sake of us both,

Cutting one another free,

Before we both die from the misery.

Although it started with two young lovers,

And there was magic along the way,

This story wonít have a happy ending,

Because this isnít a fairy tale,

But instead, our reality.


copyright(c)2004 Crystal-Rain Love 

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Reviewed by Debra Conklin
Well done.
Reviewed by Simon Thurlow (Reader)
The pain of loss. Beautiful write
Reviewed by La Belle Rouge (Reader)
So sad and deeply honest emotions. Grips the heart with raw pain.
Reviewed by Rodd Jokre
very sad, but beautiful...

Reviewed by Bhuwan Thapaliya
sad sad write...heart touching n luck....BHUWAN
Reviewed by Regis Auffray
This is painfully harsh in its realism but it expresses an angst and so much truth for many relationships. Thank you for this wonderful offering, Rain. Much love and peace to you. Regis
Reviewed by L M (Reader)
this is a painful one.
Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader)
Soon as I saw your name thouht, hey ho great write here, surely is..
Reviewed by Handsum Hart
This is a brutal truth of life. I went through this and it hurted like hell until I accepted the fact that me and her was over. Time does have a way of lessening the pain when we let go of what we can't have.

Best wishes
Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado
wow! powerful, heartfelt poem; thanks for sharing, crystal-rain!

(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in tx., karen lynn. :)
Reviewed by Kate Clifford
It is sad but somethings this is the way it ends but cutting loose before any real damage is done is extremely wise. Great write.
Reviewed by Floria Kelderhouse (Reader)
Crystal I felt this door shuts and another door opens...and life goes on...blessings to you...floria
Reviewed by Ch'erie de Perrot
Sof often the case innit mate, tis for me too, ne'er mind, we are survivors, we woman are built to conquer. Here's my fav quote, Women dont get hot flushes, they get power surges :):)
Love n hugs
Reviewed by Debashish Haar (Reader)
This is so well expressed!
Reviewed by jan nunn (Reader)
oh I know this story..the hard part is the amputation,even when the feelings are dead,it still hurts..seems like many have been here
Reviewed by Jeff Mason
WOW! Harsh truth hits home. I definitely relate strongly to this feeling! -- Jeff

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