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underground reality
by ira eden

Wednesday, November 05, 2003

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my head is spinning
through the voided blackness,
a hazy layer filtering my reality
from the plane of this world

humans, like shadows creeping
through their existence
as i linger happily in my obscurity,
humming some nameless tune in my head

the grey is quickly sucking
the life from every hue
he's trippin bad, poor soul
but i can't stay to chauffeur~
i've got to make it into the tree
if i want to live by the water's edge

underground reality
each will be pulled back into the earth~
the rest shall live as outcasts

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Reviewed by Evelyn Simon 11/14/2003
Spoooooooky. "But good." :)
Reviewed by J. Pajot 11/11/2003
Brooding and even slightly dark...I like the tension you have transmitted through these words. Really good stuff.
Reviewed by Kate Clifford 11/6/2003
Thought provoking write.
Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader) 11/6/2003
Great write, a chill atmo'
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