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| Reviewed by OnepoetGem * |
7/9/2009 |
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| good one Gwen, I'm guilty of always beating up on poor Eve, but actually I feel that Adam should have been stronger and resisted biting that apple, anyway it's hard to resist the devil, hugs |
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| Reviewed by SOULFUL SHEE G. Pulsing In Passionate Purple PassionS |
6/25/2009 |
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YOU said the truth (that I feel) with a quiet and giving heart Gwend!
It takes TWO, was always my take on this heavenly story!
Well done!
WRITE ON!
Warmest Blessings and Love, Purple Lady Passion, SHEExoo |
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| Reviewed by Jeanette Cooper |
5/20/2009 |
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| I think I like your story better than the origional one. Nicely done, Gwendolyn. |
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| Reviewed by richard cederberg |
5/20/2009 |
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Gwendolyn ...
I feel somehow an aching coming from your heart through these words. But then, poetess, what you write is always, to this reader, an honest unveiling of the passionate heart of a quiet storm. Congrats on the book. Blessings to you ... |
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| Reviewed by Regis Auffray |
5/16/2009 |
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If anyone blames Eve, then s/he had better also blame himself or herself. I do like the way you provoke thought with your verses, Gwendolyn. Thank you. Love and best wishes to you,
Regis |
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| Reviewed by Kate Burnside |
5/14/2009 |
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| I find this so poignant, Gwendolyn. I feel that Eve and Mary Magdalene get such bad press and are so misunderstood. But you have painted her delicate and beautiful here. Truly innocent in the purity of her love for him who was her root, her rock and inspiration. Such control in your writing, its strength for me lying in both its repetitions and gentle, unforceful "understatement". Nice work, thank you. Kate xx |
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| Reviewed by Dawn Mullan |
5/11/2009 |
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| This story has always troubled me, but I like your take on it. Thx, dl |
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| Reviewed by Felix Perry |
5/8/2009 |
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The symbology of Adam and Eve was I think not so much that Eve was to blame or Adam but that humanity itself was weak and we all share that weakness.
Fee |
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| Reviewed by Elizabeth Price |
5/8/2009 |
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| Eve has been unfairly blamed and scapegoated by some people who don't want to take responsibility for themselves. I've never read where Eve put a knife to Adams throat or anything. He had a choice and he made it. He should take half the blame. But when is that going to happen? Excellent poem. Certainly tripped my trigger. Liz |
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| Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado |
5/8/2009 |
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Great writing, Gwen; well done! BRAVA!
(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in Tx., Karen Lynn. :D |
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| Reviewed by Georg Mateos |
5/8/2009 |
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Eve...if only she wasn't so fond of apples...
Georg
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