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Hatak Fullih Nipi Foni (The Bone Picker)
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Eddie Thompson
Tuesday, March 16, 2004
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(For my Choctaw friends and family whose culture has been preserved in your love and friendship.)
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Hatak Fullih Nipi Foni, The Bone Picker waits for you: To scrape your bones for all to see With fingernails long and true .
Your scaffold is prepared, old soul; The bearskin craves your presence. The Bone Picker, tattooed and painted, Scoffs at your meek resistance.
He=ll paint your skull vermillion, Through cries and wails of loved ones; He=ll gather up your broken bones For burial when his work=s done.
What quickens you to fill your lungs? What inspires your feet onward? What prevents him from lighting the fire That burns until your bones char?
Pray for suns upon your brow; Rejoice for moons to dance by; Run with dirt beneath you feet, Through grass, wind, and blue sky.
Hunt for turkey, deer, and bear, Or you become the hunted. Until your bones are inside his box, The Bone Picker=s soul is haunted.
Follow the River of Life bravely To delay his feast one more day. Long life bring you safely home To the sacred mound, Nanih Waiya.
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| Reviewed by Kate Clifford |
3/27/2005 |
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| A most interesting a unique write that I have totally enjoyed. Thanks for the sharing. |
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| Reviewed by Regis Auffray |
3/11/2005 |
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| For me, this is a lesson in the learning from your creation, Eddie. Thank you. Love and peace. Regis |
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| Reviewed by Bhuwan Thapaliya |
3/3/2005 |
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| Excellent write my friend!!! |
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| Reviewed by . ShyPoet1 |
4/9/2004 |
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I give credit where credit is due.
Excellent and wonderful writing.
style and power - well done! |
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| Reviewed by Dan Summerfield (Reader) |
3/17/2004 |
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This is wonderful! The prayer of those who are closer to the Earth than any of us who cosmeticize the dead and build meaningless monuments..
Dan S. |
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| Reviewed by E T Waldron |
3/16/2004 |
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| Wonderful mystical write Eddie, I felt a spirit moving in this work! |
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| Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner |
3/16/2004 |
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(((eddie)))
WOW--this one is incredible! i felt transported back to the days of when the native americans...the ORIGINAL americans...ruled the country :)
BRAVO--well done! a keeper *thank you*
(((HUGS))) and love, karla. :) |
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| Reviewed by Floria Kelderhouse (Reader) |
3/16/2004 |
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This is beautiful Eddie...I love the use of
the native tongue in the poetry..it has a
wonderful sound..lovely lines and great flow
to this...and the message also is a great
tribute to the people...I love verse 5...
floria |
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| Reviewed by Leland Waldrip |
3/16/2004 |
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I enjoyed this excellent chant of Choctaw custom and ritual.
Best regards,
Leland |
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| Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado |
3/16/2004 |
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very nice write, pastor eddie; thanks for sharing! really enjoyed~
(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in tx., karen lynn. :D |
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