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~~~~~~~~~~~~When the flood engulfs the flame, can either ever be the same~~~~~~~~~~~
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Flowing, churning, seeking,
my love flows like a river.
Growing, burning, heating,
your flame ignites my soul.
When the flood engulfs the flame,
Can either ever be the same?
Will the flood, unrestrained,
with a whoosh, put out the fire?
Will the flame, sizzling hot,
now quench the flood's desire?
Together can they form a steam,
Sustaining love, attaining dreams?
Flowing, growing, knowing now
that my flood will feed your flame.
Churning, burning, learning how
that fire never can be tamed.
The two embrace, releasing pain;
Neither will ever be the same.
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| Reviewed by Cathrine Hottran |
4/27/2005 |
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| excellent written! |
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| Reviewed by Regis Auffray |
4/25/2004 |
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| One cannot underestimate the power of love if you put it that way, Eddie. Thank you for this offering. Love and peace. Regis |
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| Reviewed by Retta (Reindeer) Mckenzie |
4/22/2004 |
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Wonderfully written, quite lovely!
Reindeer |
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| Reviewed by Mr. Ed |
4/20/2004 |
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| Wonderful poem. Truly enjoyed! |
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| Reviewed by Jack Roberts |
4/20/2004 |
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Very Nice!!!!
Jack |
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| Reviewed by *********** ********** (Reader) |
4/19/2004 |
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Flowing, growing, knowing now
that my flood will feed your flame.
Churning, burning, learning how <----love that part.......wonderful work here.......ty, Dani
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| Reviewed by andrea coltman |
4/19/2004 |
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| Very good verses...best wishes Andrea |
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| Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado |
4/19/2004 |
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Nice write, Pastor Eddie!
(((HUGS))) and much love, your Tx. friend, Karen Lynn. :D |
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