|Reviewed by Lynna Roller
|This poem made me cry. Thank you.|
|Reviewed by A Serviceable Villain
Absolutely beautiful ode ... well-done; Bravo!!
|Reviewed by Cynth'ya firstname.lastname@example.org
|16 tends to make 30 something parents feel ten times older! (smiles)
Serene and reflective, nice work Bro. Eddie
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|Reviewed by Mary Quire
|This is beautiful. My daughter turns sixteen this November. If you don't mind, I'd love to print a copy of this poem out for her.
|Reviewed by Regis Auffray
|"Listen closely, my precious dear;
Learn to treasure each song and tear;
Grow to cherish all those years
that give you such complection!"
Wise advice indeed and lovingly expressed, Eddie.
Love and peace. Regis
|Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado
|nice job, pastor! well done!
(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in tx., karen lynn. :)
(be praying for me; am sick with a cold, also threw my back out when i sneezed. OW! thanks!)
|Reviewed by M. B.
|LOL This is sooo cute. *Ode* has lovely rhythm and rhyme. I'm sure Ahna (gorgeous name, btw) was tickled to pieces when she read this. I know I woulda been. :)|
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|Reviewed by Karen Chalfant (Reader)
|Beautiful poem, Eddie!|
|Reviewed by Dave Harm
|Wise advice. I wish I could have cherished more of those years, instead of running or "knowing it all."|
|Reviewed by Lori Moore
|Reviewed by Judy Lloyd (Reader)
|To be sweet sixteen again and when the world was at my feet. A beautiful post.|