|Reviewed by Vesna Vanessa
|...am in sync with your train of thought..as are many others!
am saving this one ..thank you Shawn..
|Reviewed by Regis Schilken
|Sounds like the feelings of emptiness all of us have. Nice wording!|
|Reviewed by Carolyn Red Bear (The Bear Paw)
|Hi Shawn, So much more to that "peace" isn't there? Thank you for sharing this emotionally charged write.. =))
|Reviewed by Dawn Mullan
|Know these feelings all to well. Great write. Thank you, DL Mullan|
|Reviewed by Annabel Sheila
|Yes Shawn, I have been there. Excellent write.
|Reviewed by randy smith
|If you drop a pebble into a pond its ripples cross the pond. are not your words like pebbles, droped into the pond of humanity?rcs|
|Reviewed by Lois Christensen
|Tossed back from the ocean, but the ocean is so peaceful a place to me. You are not lost among the sand, you are revived and going on from your losses very nicely.|
|Reviewed by m j hollingshead
|i like this|
|Reviewed by Doug Jones
|truer words were never spoken|
|Reviewed by Karen Vanderlaan
|very poignant write-i feel like i am in the lost phase right now--anyway, a well done write|
|Reviewed by jude forese
|a powerful sense of loss of control over the events in your life ...|
|Reviewed by Daniel McTaggart
|Yes we have. A very apt comparison.|
|Reviewed by Lady GoldStar
|I like it.... the words flow so well..~Lady GoldStar|
|Reviewed by Regis Auffray
|Yes. You are right. You express a universal human theme here, Shawn. I can certainly relate. Thank you for sharing this offering. Love and peace to you,
|Reviewed by Susan Sonnen
|an excellent description of a feeling of helplessness...of being the recipient of whatever whim the fates might have
this is very, very good. it reads very well.