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| Reviewed by Annabel Sheila |
7/20/2009 |
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Yes Shawn, I have been there. Excellent write.
Anna |
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| Reviewed by randy smith |
3/11/2009 |
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| If you drop a pebble into a pond its ripples cross the pond. are not your words like pebbles, droped into the pond of humanity?rcs |
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| Reviewed by Lois Christensen |
4/30/2008 |
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| Tossed back from the ocean, but the ocean is so peaceful a place to me. You are not lost among the sand, you are revived and going on from your losses very nicely. |
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| Reviewed by m j hollingshead |
11/18/2007 |
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| i like this |
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| Reviewed by Doug Stevens |
5/13/2007 |
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| truer words were never spoken |
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| Reviewed by Karen Vanderlaan |
4/27/2007 |
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| very poignant write-i feel like i am in the lost phase right now--anyway, a well done write |
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| Reviewed by jude forese |
9/11/2006 |
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| a powerful sense of loss of control over the events in your life ... |
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| Reviewed by Daniel McTaggart |
9/11/2006 |
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| Yes we have. A very apt comparison. |
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| Reviewed by Lady GoldStar |
9/11/2006 |
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| I like it.... the words flow so well..~Lady GoldStar |
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| Reviewed by Regis Auffray |
9/7/2006 |
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Yes. You are right. You express a universal human theme here, Shawn. I can certainly relate. Thank you for sharing this offering. Love and peace to you,
Regis |
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| Reviewed by Susan Sonnen |
9/6/2006 |
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an excellent description of a feeling of helplessness...of being the recipient of whatever whim the fates might have
this is very, very good. it reads very well.
Susan |
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