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| Reviewed by Randy Camp |
9/23/2008 |
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| I have written a razor's edge song also...good job |
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| Reviewed by Victoria's Poetry & Voices of Muse |
8/17/2008 |
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Jeff,
This is a very intense song for certain.
The urgent melodic tones tear at passions throat &
then revive with breadth inhaled for love this sharp as your "razon's edge"...
very intense poem
Embraced ~ Embrassé
Vickie |
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| Reviewed by La Belle Rouge Poetess Of The Heart |
8/6/2008 |
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| Well penned as always Jeff. |
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| Reviewed by Karen Vanderlaan |
8/5/2008 |
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| how painful love is! well written! |
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| Reviewed by - - - - - TRASK |
8/3/2008 |
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Hey,My Musician Friend Tom Can Put This To Music (Lyrics) For You...
Kool.....
TRASK |
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| Reviewed by Regis Auffray |
8/3/2008 |
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You're the expert, Jeff. I'm quite sure you could make this into a fine song. As for the theme of this, I can indeed relate. Thanks for sharing. Love and peace to you,
Regis |
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| Reviewed by E T Waldron |
8/3/2008 |
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Wow! methinks you'd have a hit with this song Jeff! Go for it!
Cool graphic!...ET |
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