|Reviewed by Randy Camp
|I have written a razor's edge song also...good job|
|Reviewed by Victoria's Poetry & Voices of Muse
This is a very intense song for certain.
The urgent melodic tones tear at passions throat &
then revive with breadth inhaled for love this sharp as your "razon's edge"...
very intense poem
Embraced ~ Embrassé
|Reviewed by La Belle Rouge Poetess Of The Heart
|Well penned as always Jeff.|
|Reviewed by Karen Vanderlaan
|how painful love is! well written!|
|Reviewed by - - - - - TRASK
|Hey,My Musician Friend Tom Can Put This To Music (Lyrics) For You...
|Reviewed by Regis Auffray
|You're the expert, Jeff. I'm quite sure you could make this into a fine song. As for the theme of this, I can indeed relate. Thanks for sharing. Love and peace to you,
|Reviewed by E T Waldron
|Wow! methinks you'd have a hit with this song Jeff! Go for it!