|Reviewed by Jena Ayro
Adore being in the nice
warm rain, as if feels
as if nature herself is
scrubbing me down and
maken me shiny and new
Only, it can be very
accommodating in those
times when things just
aren't the way you feel
they should be
As the tears can hide
in amongst all the rain
drops so nobody can see
them, while the warmth
of each tear mixes with
And the breezes dry
them away as mothers
kisses once did
of haunting pains
that you have captured
Thanks for the read
and points of view
|Reviewed by Morgan Merriweather
|This flows so nicely, a beautiful piece. It seems you wrote this with others in mind . however , I do get the sense this would not be far from your experiences either.|
|Reviewed by Jane Noponen Perinacci
|The pain felt here would go well with some heavy guitar. I can hear a singer belting out these lyrics. I love it!
|Reviewed by J. Roseline
|O l,It is just beautiful, the rhythm and the words just as it is in the beating of the rain ... running from the pain.
|Reviewed by Linda Hill
This is outstanding work. I could feel your pain in each verse. From now on I'm tracking you.
Blessings & Peace,
|Reviewed by Ray Henderson (Reader)
|I love your work! I think there is more meaning behind your words than people realize. I can almost feel your life and I admire you a great deal.--Ray|
|Reviewed by Ch'erie de Perrot
|Well Jeff, I reckon that is as good as any other Crooners love song you'll hear on the airwaves. I enjoyed that, even though it is essentially sad.
Thanks for stopping by my den too
|Reviewed by Joy Valadez-Acuna (Reader)
|very heartfelt, I enjoyed your voice as well as the words you sang. I remember my love of music and singing when I was younger. I have not sang publically in many years, now. I used to sing in choirs and solos at my churches. Now, I just sing in the shower. hahaha. But I admire your courage to sing acappella, especially. I thoroughly enjoyed it, Cuz.|
|Reviewed by La Belle Rouge Poetess Of The Heart
|This is stunning work Jeff, ty for sharing.|
|Reviewed by Karen Vanderlaan
|so well expressed!|
|Reviewed by Karen Palumbo
|Wow you really poured your heart into this, excellent piece and wish you much luck getting this recorded. Just brilliant...
Be always safe,
|Reviewed by Ronald Hull
|It played in Quicktime, but I got no sound. That's a shame, because it looks good as written.
|Reviewed by Marcia Miller-Twiford
|It's wonderful. I do hope someone records it. I wish you great success Jeff. You deserve it. And, your singing isn't bad, quite good in fact.|
|Reviewed by George Carroll
|Polish this up a little and you have a sure fire Country Western hit which Glen Campbell sure could use and do it justice. Hope you find someone who will love it and make it a great success for you.
|Reviewed by Gwen Dickerson
|Thank you, Jeff! I played the audio as I read -- and I sincerely loved this heartfelt song! I'm wishing you lots of success with it!|
|Reviewed by Bonnie May
|So Beautiful Jeff and I could hear in being sung as I read. Absolutely lovely, Would love to hear it when it's put to music. Love and hugs, Bonnie|