Came and Went
by T N Wilson
Friday, November 19, 2004
Rated "PG" by the Author.
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And the absense had come to a close
and the boy's form arose at the door;
and the girl greeted him with joy and surprise
but soon knew there was much to realize;
for the times had changed,
and he wasn't the same,
as he had been in his youth;
the spark had dulled in his eyes
after the day his friend had died,
and now she knew for sure
that this pain she'd continue to endure;
for he had forgotten
what he had once thought he had lost,
and she was forced to return
to her personal hell,
as he came and went,
without as much as a thought.
I am JACK! ...The Pumpkin King...
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|Reviewed by Regis Auffray
|Soul-grasping in emotion and meaning expressed, Nikki. Thank you for sharing this offering. Love and peace to you. Regis|
|Reviewed by Linda Roman
|to her personal hell....(wow) I feel her pain.... nice work|
|Reviewed by Jeff Mason
|thank you for posting this Nikki; you are showing even more promise; this is astoundingly emotive poetry, with clear sadness and longing for something that has been lost. But... just remember: you cannot lose something that you never had. -- Jeff|
|Reviewed by Ted Sheridan (Reader)
|Reminds me of Bob Dylan's "I Used To Love You But Things Have Changed". Good to see you writing.|