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· A Work in Progress - Come the Realms of Winter

· The Dragon and The Rose - Part 2: The Confrontation

· The Dragon and The Rose - Part 1: The Turning Point

Short Stories
· The Papyrus of Queen Nitocris

· Childhood Shadows

· Challenge Given at Time of Roman Catholic Confirmation

· Time Just What is it?

· More is to be Posted soon

· Interesting Twist to an OLD FAVORITE


· Rhode Island History --Inspiration for Horror!

· What are fans saying about The Dragon and The Rose Fantasy Series

· Prophetical Waters

· Answer To The Question - What Should We Become?

· A Path to Where?

· Coming is The End or is it The Change

· Acoustic

· In this world we can see

· World Net

· Miss You

· Captured

· I Awake

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· Author's article and short story appear in October issue of ezine

· Print On Demand Author Event at Barnes and Noble

· Author Interviewed by the Baltimore Sun

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  Oh! I See.
by Diane C Hundertmark
Sunday, July 29, 2007
Rated "G" by the Author.

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Romance ? Well yes but also FUN!!
As you willl see I am not good at satire and since this was written a very long time ago. This is here for enjoyment only

I just found this one.  I was surprised sorting through a very old stack of writing, including ancient stuff.  This was written on January 7, 1970!!!  It turned out, it was turned in to English in High School and I was graded 70%.  **Grin**
Have fun with this one.

Oh I See.

Oh say can you see
Through the smoke and the fog
own true love's window
Whom you adore?

Oh why, may I ask
are your eyes watering?
Is it because you cannot
wait til she is by
your side?

No! You say this is not why
your eyes are so bright
Then tell me why
you look so in love?

Oh! I see
It's the smoke and the fog
That burns your eyes bright.


Even for the teacher I commented at the bootom, "As you can see I'm not good at satire."


Comments and pokes of fun are welcomed. I have found a number from way back in the 1970's or earlier and will post them soon

Enjoy and have fun.








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Reviewed by Linda Law 7/2/2008
This was good no matter how old... it still applies! lindalaw

Books by
Diane C Hundertmark

The Dragon and The Rose - Part 1: The Turning Point

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The Dragon and The Rose - Part 2: The Confrontation

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  2. The guiding lights
  3. Rosebuds
  4. Sleep / Sueño
  5. Memories
  7. My Mother
  8. Never Forgotten
  9. Your Love Remains
  10. Freedom
  11. Peace
  13. Joy Above
  14. Validation
  15. a season of singing...
  16. Letting Go
  17. Note to Self, Number One
  18. Some Day Our Prince Will Come
  19. By the Dawn's Early Light
  20. The Writer

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