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Diane C Hundertmark

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· A Work in Progress - Come the Realms of Winter

· The Dragon and The Rose - Part 2: The Confrontation

· The Dragon and The Rose - Part 1: The Turning Point

Short Stories
· The Papyrus of Queen Nitocris

· Childhood Shadows

· Challenge Given at Time of Roman Catholic Confirmation

· Time Just What is it?

· More is to be Posted soon

· Interesting Twist to an OLD FAVORITE


· Rhode Island History --Inspiration for Horror!

· What are fans saying about The Dragon and The Rose Fantasy Series

· Prophetical Waters

· Answer To The Question - What Should We Become?

· A Path to Where?

· Coming is The End or is it The Change

· Acoustic

· In this world we can see

· World Net

· Oh! I See.

· Miss You

· Captured

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· Author's article and short story appear in October issue of ezine

· Print On Demand Author Event at Barnes and Noble

· Author Interviewed by the Baltimore Sun

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  New Title - A spining world
by Diane C Hundertmark
Saturday, August 31, 2002
Rated "G" by the Author.

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By Diane C. Hundertmark

the world is spinning 'round and changing

my life is spinning out and changing



at an ever faster speed

more and more

forward --backward




making me ill and tired

unable to talk or think

and yet

there you are

quite and sedate

warm and strong

your arms around me


my spinning down

your hands


the exhaustion from my mind

your words whispered


the world's spinning 'round

your eyes


out my thoughts


my soul

Copyrighted 1981

This was written to my husband many years ago for our anniversary. 

Now I have given it a Title.

Now that we are going to be at one of those important number of years anniversary this year, I think I may be giving this to him again.

It fits very well since NOW I have fully recovered from the accident I had in 2006 that took me away from writing for time.



The Dragon and The Rose

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Reviewed by Regis Schilken 8/4/2013
Happy Anniversary! This next one will be #47 for me and I would have it no other way.

Problem is, one of us must leave before the other ...
Reviewed by Amor Sabor 4/14/2012
Oh my...this one is old...originally written in 1981? That goes back a long time to be apt still. Excellent work.
Reviewed by Paul Judges 12/16/2009
Unique layout....well written, Diane.
Reviewed by Sheila Roy 9/25/2009
It's great to have someone to catch us when we need them to. We're lucky if we have that. I like the style of this poem. You give a feeling of falling (spinning) out of control. Nicely penned:)
Reviewed by Annabel Sheila 5/11/2009
Beautiful! Interesting way you put this together. I enjoyed reading it and I'm sure your husband will love it. Good job.
Reviewed by Randall Barfield 1/30/2009
It's rather nice, I think. Some people are kites & others are rocks. Both are important. :)
Reviewed by John Domino 9/27/2008
Very creative!

God Bless,

Reviewed by Lois Christensen 7/26/2008
Great to have you online again. A spinning world you presented to us. Things should fall into place woon with the anniversary to celebrate this year. Enjoyable write. Hope hubby loves it. A nice present.
Reviewed by Micha Julian 4/8/2003
Oh, and the much relate, just waiting for the "you"...WONDERFUL, really love that you spun it, literally onto the screen, and what it 'means', oh, yes! +++++
Reviewed by Nickolaus Pacione 10/20/2002
not too shabby -- damn, never realized you have a classic here.
Reviewed by Peter Benson 10/4/2002
Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado 8/31/2002
oh, this is indeed nice!! loved this!!

Books by
Diane C Hundertmark

The Dragon and The Rose - Part 1: The Turning Point

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The Dragon and The Rose - Part 2: The Confrontation

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  1. Letís Heat the Sheets
  2. Sunset
  3. My Sandals That Is All...
  4. No Longer Afraid...
  5. Our Pacific Journey Pt 1
  6. My World
  7. The Art of the Night
  8. No One Else But Her
  9. A Dozen Red Roses
  10. Enclose Valentine Love
  11. How Much I Love You
  12. run to you
  13. You Are Too Much Woman
  14. When You Kiss Me
  15. In A Locket
  16. Catatonia
  17. I Trace Her Smile
  18. Affectueux
  19. Intimately
  20. Come Closer

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