|Reviewed by Monette Bebow-Reinhard (Reader)
|I agree - this would make a wonderful song, true heart and emotion involved - thanks for sharing!
|Reviewed by Meva Onyurt
You have the gift of a poet and the talent of song-writer!!!
Thank u for sharing your excellence!
|Reviewed by Eddie Thompson
|The essence of relationship. I liked this poem.|
|Reviewed by Bonita Quesinberry
|Very good, definitely conveys the healing power of love!
Love in Christ~~
|Reviewed by Nickolaus Pacione
|have any short stories which were written about that time as well? This one is older than I am. Good write to boot as well.|
|Reviewed by Michael Bauer (Reader)
|Excellent! Simple, but to the point. It's always (most of the time) good to bring past works out. They can make us remember the feelings that brought forth the work in the first place.|
|Reviewed by Maria Fiorille
|on "it was so hard" you need a separator... cuz the entire tense/tone/reason of the poem changes right there for a second... maybe "but..." or take it out and shove it at the end|