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| Reviewed by Bonita Quesinberry, R.C. |
6/26/2003 |
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| Actually, I must agree with Ann Berg: this poem is finished and quite to the waking point at that. Keep up the good work by moving on to new works. ~~Love in Christ, Bonnie Q |
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| Reviewed by Ann Berg |
4/26/2003 |
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I would consider this finished,
Great! |
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| Reviewed by Peter Benson |
4/18/2003 |
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| Evokes that first awakening moment beautifully. |
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| Reviewed by Josephine Bohen |
4/17/2003 |
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have to agree with Elizabeth
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| Reviewed by Nickolaus Pacione |
4/17/2003 |
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| this one is a good one to say the least. You call this a work in progress -- how much longer are you going to make this one? Keep up the strong work. I got a poem up here titled "Pacione's Inferno" and a short story titled "Dreams From The Stillborn." |
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| Reviewed by E. Lucas-Taylor |
4/16/2003 |
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| Looks like a finished work to me. Flows beautifully and the choice of words is supurb. |
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