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| Reviewed by Mark Mahoney |
5/11/2005 |
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| A very well composed write, i enjoyed it very much, take care...Mark |
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| Reviewed by Robert Sheridan |
5/12/2004 |
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| Much was uttered in this 'horrific' prose - a fine write! |
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| Reviewed by Lori Moore |
5/10/2004 |
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| Excellent write. Enjoyed! |
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| Reviewed by Bhuwan Thapaliya |
5/10/2004 |
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| Superb write of horror....deep deep deep...love n luck....BHUWAN |
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| Reviewed by Robin Ouzman Hislop |
5/10/2004 |
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| times fabric is creased, what an incredible line. beautifully devised presentation, the lyric immediatly engages even as the reading holds you in suspense & leads you on. in fact as a dramatic reenaction in response to a horror movie i was transported, or sent, as you so well capture eerieness & the sinister & parody with tongue in cheek, in your v intelligent writing. saludos robin |
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| Reviewed by Andre Bendavi Benyehu (Reader) |
5/9/2004 |
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The closing lines knock the doors of one's mind, and say: "DARE NOT BE A FOOL".
I have enjoyed the reading of this thirty-two lines – four stanzas composition, – and have learned from this grandiloquent poetical writing, from the quill of Her Sublimity, Poet Sara L. Russell!
On this forty-ninth Evening of Spring I Salute You, Sublime Poet!
Andre Emmanuel Bendavi ben-YEHU |
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| Reviewed by Katryn Dougherty |
5/9/2004 |
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*shivers*
As a fan of all things horror I must say I loved it.
Great job. |
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| Reviewed by jude forese |
5/9/2004 |
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my lips are sealed ;)
i enjoyed the feel of this poem... |
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| Reviewed by Ian Thorpe |
5/9/2004 |
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but if you don't tell usd what it is SArah how can we be safe - unless its something like "xyzzy" of course.
I enjoyed the rhythm of this and the construction leads us along unfailingly.
Nice to see you back Pinky love. |
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| Reviewed by Jim Dunlap |
5/9/2004 |
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| Well, this is certainly an interesting change of pace for you. I do hope all you are rapidly improving, as I know walking around with a crutch has got to be the pits. :) It might even make me write horror stories. |
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| Reviewed by Debashish Haar |
5/9/2004 |
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Quite a feel>>>
"Never utter the word
That summons the Beast".
< < < < repeats and gives...each time with an effect greater the previous time...
I like the way you ended it...Do I see more than the horror in the poem, friend!!
Debashish
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