Lamia
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Sara L Russell
Tuesday, October 05, 2004
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(A sonnet trilogy on the adventures of a Lamia from Brighton, England. Illustration: Copyright Sara L. Russell, October 2003)
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LAMIA (sonnet trilogy) Copyright Sara L. Russell, 22nd September 2004
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Within fathomless chambers of your dreams, Past glittering remains of lost desire, Like fallen empires borne on lava streams, Therein I fly, soaring on wings of fire.
Rare sandalwood imparts her smoky breath, Sweetens the air wherever I alight, Even unto Hades' caverns of death, Bringing your shuttered eyes eternal night.
I gaze, unblinking as the eye of Ra, Toward the sun and her attendant spheres, I know the genesis of every star, Each wormhole, where all matter disappears.
Bold deities tremble beneath my glare, Fall into heedless sleep - and I'll be there.
II
Answers to why he cannot sleep at night Aimlessly circle in his tortured mind. Dark hair in disarray, face deathly-white, He strives to leave the conscious world behind.
And still she comes, despite his fervent prayers, With kisses more ferocious than the first, To dissipate all memories and cares, Pinning him down, to slake her torrid thirst.
Soon hushed entreaties melt to honeyed sighs. He feels the draught of wingbeats on his face, Opium petals flutter to his eyes, She presses close; his heart begins to race.
Daybreak arrives, the same as all the rest: He wakes supine, with claw marks on his chest.
III
Glide down from Brighton's bright Pavilion, Feeling the salt sea breeze upon my breast; Beneath the Arches, mortal men dream on, While I alight nearby, to take my rest.
Now mermaids rest their voices and depart To deeper fathoms than mankind has seen, Swirling through chasms in the ocean's heart To rest on undulating beds of green.
Now pigeons wake, now seagulls speed their flight, And Oscar's sphinx has folded her great wings. Mankind awakes to greet the morning light With eagerness for unimportant things.
Soon comes nightfall. When everything is still I shall return for you, to take my fill!
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| Reviewed by L. Figgins |
5/8/2005 |
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| A feast of the senses seen and unseen! Fantastic, Sara. I found you via Nordette via Poetry Life & Times...Happy Mother's Day |
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| Reviewed by Joshua Miller (Reader) |
12/31/2004 |
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| wow! Clearly you are a poet of utmost observation. I truly enjoyed reading this, what I believe is "classic" poetry at its best. This is a concrete and episodic marvel, thanks. |
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| Reviewed by Regis Auffray |
12/18/2004 |
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| Wonderful imagery and the creativity and perfection is awesome, Sara. Thank you for sharing this offering. Love and peace to you. Regis |
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| Reviewed by Robert Sheridan |
10/10/2004 |
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Sara,
Shear poetic perfection - lovely imagery!!
Robert |
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| Reviewed by Carmen Ruggero |
10/10/2004 |
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Perfect form, Sara. I really enjoyed this trilogy. Thank you.
Carmen :-) |
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| Reviewed by jude forese |
10/6/2004 |
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| the imagery is outstanding! |
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| Reviewed by ya mama (Reader) |
10/6/2004 |
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| fab write. |
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| Reviewed by Ian Thorpe |
10/6/2004 |
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She sounds a very naughty little succubus I'm sure I have met her down in Brighton. But then I met lots of naughty girlies in Brighton - and I'm not sure all of them were proper girlies....
Could the Bloodsucker of Brighton be related to the Batter Pudding Hurler of Bexhill on Sea I wonder? I also wonder what our Amertican friends make of us Brits at times
Great work this Sara,
love
Ian |
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| Reviewed by Bonnie Torrente |
10/5/2004 |
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FANTASTIC!!!!!
Thank You for sharing these lovely works.
Love,
Bonnie |
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| Reviewed by Andre Bendavi ben-YEHU |
10/5/2004 |
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I salute You, Sublime Poet!
I have enjoyed reading "Lamia" I, II, III, "A TRILOGY of English Sonnets", (Written in English Sonnet's Form.) from which I learned and fed my mind.
This is a composition that complies with Poetry's must, and delivers three Flowers scented with the aroma of knowledge, and the poetic energy.
Thank You for allowing us to learn from Your wise messages, and for inspiring us through Your poetic magnificence.
Gratefully,
Andre Emmanuel Bendavi ben-YEHU |
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| Reviewed by E T Waldron |
10/5/2004 |
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Totally captivating! This is magical enchantment at its best!
Thank you for sharing! |
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| Reviewed by A PAX |
10/5/2004 |
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ohhhhhhhhhh
she is an succubus!!!
Beautiful poetry indeed! |
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| Reviewed by Silvia Hartmann |
10/5/2004 |
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Very romantic! Very exciting! Like a movie of Brighton on different levels, fading in and out between two realities. Very nice and I also liked the unusual (for AD) structure of the sonnet trilogy.
Cool!
SFxxx :-)
(East Sussex Poets, Unite! :-) |
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