|Reviewed by Brenda Dobson
|Hi there, Sara, "Housebound" captures beautiful imagery associated with life's final transition. Wonderfully expressive. Your words, "Sweet love, make me a present of the sky" is especially touching. Thank you so much for posting it.
|Reviewed by Ken Chartrand
|Hello Sara, I read your poem,"Housebound" I found kinda sad but well written.This is good work. Great imagery! Please feel free to visit my site here in the "Den"|
|Reviewed by Samuel Stone
|Wonderful poem, great imagery...
Wishing you well...
|Reviewed by m j hollingshead
|well done enjoyed the read|
|Reviewed by C. McGovern-Bowen
|Now that autumn has arrived, my 90-ish mother loves to be wheeled out into the meditation garden at her nursing home. She sits quietly and breathes in arctic blasts ferried our way (southern California) by the Jet Stream. I think she is like your "reeling peterels"; those slipstreams of eternity do invite!
This is an exceptional piece of work, Sara.
Peace and Blessings,
|Reviewed by Axilea MU
|Personal use of word combinations that touch the soul and mind of everyone.
|Reviewed by Sage Sweetwater
|Confinement of any sorts makes one delirious - the IV drip replaced with the liquid gold sunshine and heaven's rain - and it is so good to see you posting again, Sara, I have missed your poetry. Around January 2006, I think I recall you being housebound - a broken leg? Your quill is surely intact this season...be well always, Sara, I think about you often...you've left us a great poetic legacy in Poetry Life & Times...much appreciation, and to Robin and his staff for their continued efforts...Blessed Be.
|Reviewed by Karen Palumbo
|Such intimate expressions fill this passionate piece from your heart. A very lovely write....
|Reviewed by chris stienstra
|Wonderfully expressed and written. Sometimes we need to break down those walls and ceilings in our spirits to get off the ground and feel eternity.
Enjoyed this very much.
|Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner
|This one is effectively powerful, Sara. Almost claustrophobic: having spent many days in hospital, I know the feeling all too well of wanting to burst out of the room, freeeeeeeeeeeeeee: well done.
(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.