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| Reviewed by The Smoking Poet |
9/22/2004 |
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There is always hope.
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| Reviewed by A Serviceable Villain |
7/28/2004 |
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Sara -
Spellbinding! Excellent!
Robert |
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| Reviewed by Meva Onyurt |
4/20/2004 |
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It is really much easier to form the imagery of love and peace through the angelic, but you really succeed in making us feel the "hope" and peace through the evil. Which is the hardest way!
You did it! This poem reminded me of Blake's Marriage of Heaven and Hell.
Good Luck
Meva
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| Reviewed by Jim Dunlap |
12/19/2003 |
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| I don't think there's anything wrong with the first line. I do think proclaim her name would be interesting in the last line. Otherwise, this is fabulous, as usual. |
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| Reviewed by Sara Russell |
11/24/2003 |
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| Thanks Oirdheirc Mor... you have a valid point about the first line. It would probably work with either "onto" or "upon" (sorry, I am a Libran; terrible at decisions). It could be "onto" if she was standing over the box reaching down to it, or "upon" if she was looking up at the box, if it was on a shelf and she had to reach up to it. We will never know for sure.... |
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| Reviewed by Oirdheirc Mor (Reader) |
11/22/2003 |
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Hi Sara.
Sorry to be the lone dissenter on your poem, I did not think the first line of this poem was so very clever.
Personally I think” upon “the lid was more appropriate. Upon meaning up and onto towards.
Gives a different meaning to the movement of the hands.
Tatty by for now.
Oirdheirc Mor
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| Reviewed by . ShyPoet1 |
11/18/2003 |
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| I like this very much, and agree, its divine. |
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| Reviewed by *********** ********** (Reader) |
11/18/2003 |
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Wonderful poetry Sara.....Killer last line...I love a closing that smacks you right in the face...The art is awesome.
Ty, I very much enjoyed, Dani
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| Reviewed by Richard Vallance (Reader) |
11/16/2003 |
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Oh Sara, how utterly divine!
That last verse cut my breath off!
Well, you know what to do, eh? Submit this and pic for pub in the Winter 2004 issue of SP. It's a clincher!
Bye for now,
Richard Vallance
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| Reviewed by Ian Thorpe |
11/13/2003 |
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Hi Sweetie,
You don't know the joke about hope disappearing over the horizon with its arse on fire then?
's funny but I was playing around with Pandora ideas just last week. Must be the way things are in the world.
Loved this one.
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| Reviewed by E T Waldron |
11/10/2003 |
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| Superb sonnet, and the art is awesome! |
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| Reviewed by Regis Auffray |
11/9/2003 |
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| Wonderful image to complement your verbal expression. Thank you for this offering. |
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| Reviewed by Robin Ouzman Hislop |
11/9/2003 |
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| Fascinating, a bit in the mode of Roberto Callesso, which was also a best seller, great theme i look forward to seeing its fruitition |
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| Reviewed by E. Richardson |
11/9/2003 |
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| An excellent rendition of Pandora's Box...well done! |
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| Reviewed by Zenith Elliott |
11/8/2003 |
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| Sara, you did an outstanding job on the illustration and the sonnet, a joy to read! ~Z~ |
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| Reviewed by Bhuwan Thapaliya |
11/8/2003 |
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| sara....wonderful write....loved the image too....love n luck....BHUWAN |
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| Reviewed by Helga Ross |
11/8/2003 |
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Excellent!
Love the image, also. |
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