Unless you are in Love!
by Donni De-Ville
Wednesday, August 18, 2004
Rated "G" by the Author.
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This is how it is for people who just have 'sex.' One night stands and affairs, when they have no wish to settle down with that person. Sadly this applies very much to the young nowadays. (Not to mention the diseases they are risking!)
No-one belongs to anyone;
And loving's just the same.
The beginnings are so exciting;
When it's all you have in your brain.
Then after a while you realize;
And wonder what you saw.
You wish there was something new to give;
It's all been done before!
The first times seem so special;
The heart is there, in your mind!
But, then it's just like it used to be;
There's no new way to find.
When woman has touched, man explored;
There can only be one notion.
Too much of themselves given to others;
So now they just go through the motion.
Repeating the movements time after time;
Each touch, exactly the same.
Close your eyes, turn back the clock;
It could be any old flame!
(Unless, you're really in love!)
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|Reviewed by Amira van Kerk
|That's quite interesting.
Sex and love should always go together - but sometimes this is just a stupid dream that won't work out.
I have lost my illusions and hopes.
|Reviewed by P. Michaels
|Donni, you're right. Sex is just an act and means nothing unless one truly loves and cares about the other person.
|Reviewed by Franz Kessler
|Thanks for this. Beyond any concept of morality I believe sex has an element of holyness. It hurts to see people depriving themselves from glimpses of genuine experience and wonder. Franz|
|Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner
this needs to be given to every single young man and woman. BRAVA! for standing up for them and educating them. KUDOS!
(((HUGS))) and love, karla. :)
|Reviewed by Katryn Dougherty
|if we could get that through to the up and coming we would be set.
|Reviewed by A PAX
|Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
|Imagination can be useful.......lol!!
|Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado
|good message in this write, donni-jay! well done!
(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in tx., karen lynn. ;)