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The 'almost' demise of Paul Bruce, just a few months ago!
by Donni-Jay De-Ville
Monday, November 17, 2003
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This is my story in poetry/prose, about my husband's near visit to 'the other side'!



Taking Paul to hospital, I was surprised to find;
He seemed so cool as if he had, nothing on his mind.
I was in a state, having been a nurse;
I knew that anesthetics can take a turn for the worse.


I kissed him goodbye as he went through that door;
Not knowing if I'd be seeing him any more.
Then in the waiting room his surgeon came through;
Told me the position, but what could I do?


Desperate to see him, to be there if he went;
All of my energy, strength, had been spent.
Marlene the surgeon told me he'd be all right;
But under the circumstances, he must stay the night.


The 'knock out drop' lady came to see me, complained;
 Not telling her of his drinking, and me she did blame!
She said due to his past he had reacted to the drops;
I explained that telling her, me, he did stop.


Marlene was the saviour, a sweetie at best;
She consoled me, laying my mind to rest.
On seeing Paul in the recovery room;
I was surprised he looked so well, so soon!


He just could not, understand my fuss;
 No-one had told him he'd darn near missed the bus!
I stayed with him in the ward but, dearie me;
No-one would even give me a cup of tea!



 

(That's the National Health Service for you!) 
 

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Reviewed by Regis Auffray 11/17/2003
You make me think of how fragile life really is. Thank you for this offering, Donni-Jay. Love, peace and strength, Regis.
Reviewed by Evelyn Simon 11/17/2003
First of all, the poem was great. :)
Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado 11/17/2003
so glad that paul made it! wonderful write! (((HUGS))) and much love, your friend, karen lynn in texas. :D
Reviewed by George Carroll 11/17/2003
A mothers anguish for her sick son. A beautiful heartfelt write.
Reviewed by Cheryl Sellers 11/17/2003
I am so happy that you did not lose your beloved, but dang I don't think a cuppa would have cost to much to add to the bill,lol


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