Very simple poem of thanks!
by
Donni-Jay De-Ville
Tuesday, November 18, 2003
Rated "G" by the Author.
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I used this to express my thanks to a dear friend, in a card I sent once. Thought I would share it with you all.
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It's very frightening to be a girl on her own;
Although I have friends, I still feel alone.
One thing has changed and it makes me feel good;
That's knowing that you, would help if you could.
You're so genuine and warm, and I know that you care;
If I asked for your help, well, I know you'd be there!
Thank you!
Copyright ©2004 Donni-Jay De-Ville
All rights reserved and may not be
reproduced in any way without permission from the author
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| Reviewed by Louisa Middleton-Blake |
7/4/2007 |
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| This is a sweet little poem, and a bit sad too, which is how a story should be told, no matter how many words are used. Sometimes little is good, and in this case it's very good! Well done and good luck |
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| Reviewed by J M |
10/18/2006 |
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| This is a very nice simple thank you prayer thanks for sharing this one. |
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| Reviewed by Jim Dunlap |
5/4/2005 |
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Very nice. You are right. Friends help make our journey better (through this veil of tears). :)
Thanks for signing the guestbook on Voices For Africa.
Jim Dunlap |
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| Reviewed by afiq jani (Reader) |
1/18/2005 |
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