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Sympathy from Paul, (Not).
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Donni-Jay De-Ville
Tuesday, November 25, 2003
Rated "G" by the Author.
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A true story, about kitchen incident.
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I was cooking in the kitchen;
And had a disaster.
I shouted to Paul, who said is that all?
Pressed the wound and made blood flow faster!
Well, it's a little bit worse;
Than I thought at first.
He said with a face full of laughter.
It didn't appeal, but he still got his meal;
But he didn't get his bread pudding after!
Copyright ©2004 Donni-Jay De-Ville
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| Reviewed by m j hollingshead |
1/12/2004 |
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| chuckle |
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| Reviewed by Tami Ryan |
12/27/2003 |
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| You GO GIRL! (Laughing, laughing, I am...) |
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| Reviewed by George Carroll |
11/25/2003 |
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| Your mirth in poetry form is a delight |
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| Reviewed by Sandie Angel |
11/25/2003 |
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Awww! I would have made Paul make me the dinner. Afterall, you deserve the rest. I like it that you have also made some lines rhymed.
Sandie Angel a.k.a. May Lu :o) |
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