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|Reviewed by Vesna Vanessa
|Oh Antoinette..THIS is MY kinda poetry..love it!
|Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader)
|United in thought...... some excellent lines..|
|Reviewed by Felix Perry
|Awesome Antoinette, this is one touching and heart warming write. When two souls unite like this it is a rarity and when we can express it so well in poetry we are indeed blessed.
Great write, and I like your new profile picture.
|Reviewed by Daring Sunshine
|Beautiful tribute to your sister. I can see glimpses when I visit the twins I know in Texas.
|Reviewed by richard cederberg
There were several parts of this that I truly enjoyed. very poetic moments i believe.
"There we were,
a union among heartaches"
"when our souls who were
longing to give
became one in thought…"
Light and Wisdom ...
Richard Lloyd Cederberg